Comment from karenina

Excellent

I bow to anyone who can make anything other thana grocery list with six words...

The "history" is Hemingway wrote:

"For sale, baby shoes, never worn"

(There is some disagreement on the web as to the truth of this)

THAT is the standard for these six-word challenges and who wouldn't be moved?

You've given it your rhyming spin.

This is, yet again, unusual and therefore interesting!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024

Thanks for the nice review on this one! I love your comments!

reply by karenina on 09-Jul-2024

That works out well...

I love your poems!

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

HI
The artwork and words match well. These six words seem to describe the horrible effects of gossip on a person.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have great rest of the day and week.
Joan

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for the great review Joan!

reply by dragonpoet on 24-Apr-2024

Don't mention it, Jodi.
Joan

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This an excellent poem for the six word contest
with six rhymes as well. The theme of "lies"
will resonate with many.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great six word poem! I loved your rhyming, and I understand how lies might bring someone to tears. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for your kind review!