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A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry

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Comment from lyenochka
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What a fun Fibonacci poem and I love your humor about painting outhouses before little Baby Evelyn needed her diaper changed. And no need for outhouses for her! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Hi Helen!
    We took her to paint night again last night! She is such a good baby! We had fun and Nichole accidentally painted her lol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I've not tried these painting nights but I've heard of them. Obviously Evelyn wanted to get in on the act too. Nicely done with what I remember as being a difficult form to make sense with. But you did. Well done Kim.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Valda! We took her to paint last night, too! Such fun! Nichole accidentally got paint on her lol
    Kim
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is very cool. I didn't know about this type of poetry, so I may give it a try. Your descriptive words, excellent image, and Author Note all worked well.

Best wishes

Alex

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Alex!
Comment from jessizero
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I honestly had no idea what this poem was about until I looked at the photo you supplied. It looks and sounds like you had a great time (until the diaper, that is). Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Jessi!
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written syllable poem called the FIBonacci poetry I enjoyed reading it and it flows very well when it is read aloud I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Patricia.