Spring Arrives
A crescendo poem for the Japanese Club12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the crescendo poem challenge in the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is lovely.
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Excellent entry for the crescendo poem challenge in the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is lovely.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely, descriptive Crescendo poem, about the beginning of Spring, June. I love the sleeping cherry trees and dreaming magnolias. A lovely presentation,
Cheers
Valda
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This is a lovely, descriptive Crescendo poem, about the beginning of Spring, June. I love the sleeping cherry trees and dreaming magnolias. A lovely presentation,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
Comment from kahpot
Beautifully written and presented, I really like the way it goes from the coming of a season and the beauty it provides to the honey man receives, an excellent poem for the challenge club****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Beautifully written and presented, I really like the way it goes from the coming of a season and the beauty it provides to the honey man receives, an excellent poem for the challenge club****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a very beautiful poem about the spring that finally arrive. I hope it will last this time for while. Your poem flows well and it's almost musical. I could hear the crescendo.
I might write one, too. You sometimes inspire me.
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This is a very beautiful poem about the spring that finally arrive. I hope it will last this time for while. Your poem flows well and it's almost musical. I could hear the crescendo.
I might write one, too. You sometimes inspire me.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
Comment from nancyjam
I had not heart of this form but I like it and yours is beautiful as your imagery brings about visions of spring. the anticipation of waiting for
warm air soft breezes flowers and bees.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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I had not heart of this form but I like it and yours is beautiful as your imagery brings about visions of spring. the anticipation of waiting for
warm air soft breezes flowers and bees.
Thanks for sharing.
Nancy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and it is beautifully presented. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it has a real soothing tone to it. May you have a blessed week. Patric.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This is very well written, and it is beautifully presented. I enjoyed very much listening to it and it has a real soothing tone to it. May you have a blessed week. Patric.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!
Comment from lyenochka
This looks and feels like a nature nonet. The only thing is that it has eight lines (by the way, the last line seems to have nine syllables in my count." I loved your personification of the magnolias and the cherry trees. Hooray for the return for those bees!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This looks and feels like a nature nonet. The only thing is that it has eight lines (by the way, the last line seems to have nine syllables in my count." I loved your personification of the magnolias and the cherry trees. Hooray for the return for those bees!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
This is quite an extraordinary poem for this particular club contest. Your verse and artwork are just perfectly synced.
Your phrasing really captured the essence of Spring in your post. I await those images in my own yard. (-:
Mark
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June,
This is quite an extraordinary poem for this particular club contest. Your verse and artwork are just perfectly synced.
Your phrasing really captured the essence of Spring in your post. I await those images in my own yard. (-:
Mark
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When I was young, I was irritated by bees, but now, I love seeing them at work in Spring, I enjoyed your uplifting Spring filled joyous post June, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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When I was young, I was irritated by bees, but now, I love seeing them at work in Spring, I enjoyed your uplifting Spring filled joyous post June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written crescendo poem June, like the etheree and the nonet, you have skilfully and masterfully sculptured it very nicely indeed, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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A beautifully written crescendo poem June, like the etheree and the nonet, you have skilfully and masterfully sculptured it very nicely indeed, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for the generous stars! I?m delighted you enjoyed this crescendo poem. The Flight of the Bumblebee was playing in my head as I wrote this one. It was fun!
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Well done
