Love is in the Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Healing Touch"Love poems and sweet nothings
9 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Super job with your tanka, Ginda! And you're right that something about physical touch that is healing more than words at times when words are not enough. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Super job with your tanka, Ginda! And you're right that something about physical touch that is healing more than words at times when words are not enough. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Helen. I always appreciate your understanding comments.
Comment from Wendy G
Very moving and descriptive, and expressive of the comfort and reassurance of a gentle touch when one is in great pain. Beautifully expressed. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Very moving and descriptive, and expressive of the comfort and reassurance of a gentle touch when one is in great pain. Beautifully expressed. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Wendy. Sending good thoughts and blessings to you today.
Comment from Spitfire
Awesome entry. Poetic devices include alliteration with 'wind' 'words' and 'wound'.
Also inner rhyme with 'ease' and 'bleeds'. Consonance with the ending 'L' sound in
heal' and 'feel'.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Awesome entry. Poetic devices include alliteration with 'wind' 'words' and 'wound'.
Also inner rhyme with 'ease' and 'bleeds'. Consonance with the ending 'L' sound in
heal' and 'feel'.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for your encouraging words.
Comment from nancyjam
A beautiful touching Tanka that appeals to the reader's emotions.
Yes sometimes a loving touch says much more than words, and can heal
the broken heart.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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A beautiful touching Tanka that appeals to the reader's emotions.
Yes sometimes a loving touch says much more than words, and can heal
the broken heart.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Nancy.
Comment from June Sargent
Your milestone post is a tender tribute to the bond you share with your husband. It's string and enduring - despite whatever challenges you both face. More power to you.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Your milestone post is a tender tribute to the bond you share with your husband. It's string and enduring - despite whatever challenges you both face. More power to you.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you, June.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This Tanka is full of emotion. The final line is an interesting and sensitive metaphor. I'm glad you entered this for the contest, as well as your NaPoWriMo collection. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This Tanka is full of emotion. The final line is an interesting and sensitive metaphor. I'm glad you entered this for the contest, as well as your NaPoWriMo collection. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thanks and blessings.
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Sometimes there's only one who can help to heal wounds.
'Your touch so gentle
is all that I need to heal,
to ease my sorrow
when words spoken fail to reach
the open wound that bleeds tears.'
Beautiful words.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Sometimes there's only one who can help to heal wounds.
'Your touch so gentle
is all that I need to heal,
to ease my sorrow
when words spoken fail to reach
the open wound that bleeds tears.'
Beautiful words.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your milestone post! This was a great poem. I especially loved your last line. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Congratulations on your milestone post! This was a great poem. I especially loved your last line. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reviewing. I always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This will probably be the last one I review for you. I review one for one, and you have not been reviewing me. I recently posted to a contest, and I found out that some contest entries do not go to the mailboxes of my fans. You must go to my profile page. I have been here 8 months and just found this out. The poem is lovely. The picture blends well.
Karen :-)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This will probably be the last one I review for you. I review one for one, and you have not been reviewing me. I recently posted to a contest, and I found out that some contest entries do not go to the mailboxes of my fans. You must go to my profile page. I have been here 8 months and just found this out. The poem is lovely. The picture blends well.
Karen :-)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Contest entries do not go to fan mailboxes if it is a blind entry. This is explained in the contest rules.
