Magical Spring
Wee poem2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This poem was charming! You used your descriptive words well, and you really captured the feeling of Spring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This poem was charming! You used your descriptive words well, and you really captured the feeling of Spring. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the delightful review.
It?s nice to know my wee poem was a pleasant read !
Comment from Mark Jackson
The tanka adheres to the traditional 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure, demonstrating your comfort with the form and rhythm. This disciplined approach lends the poem a sense of balance and harmony, reinforcing its thematic focus on the cyclical nature of life and the promise of new beginnings.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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The tanka adheres to the traditional 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure, demonstrating your comfort with the form and rhythm. This disciplined approach lends the poem a sense of balance and harmony, reinforcing its thematic focus on the cyclical nature of life and the promise of new beginnings.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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I appreciate the time you spent to analyse my wee poem.
I hope you enjoyed the read and the artwork .
