Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this Octelle form. It reminds me of the triolet with the repetition. It is such a comfort when God responds in our times of distress and we are reassured that He is there for us.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024

Blessings to you, Helen.

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

I love the message of this Octelle. God always answers our prayers, and His will is always perfect. I especially like line four, since God answers us in a variety of ways. Great message! Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024

Thank you, Carol.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

He is always there to comfort and console during those times of fear and distress. Your poem is honest and authentic. Sometimes we feel and know His presence in a quiet and extraordinary way.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

We need only be still and know He is God. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

That is very good. The picture is serene and so are the words. Soothing and serene I would say. I am not a big fan of spiritual poetry but I read all sorts and I am pleased I read yours.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thanks, Mark.