Awareness
A poem29 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Do you live by the ocean, my friend? I adore it! The idea of swimming with dolphins works for me, but so does the wisdom of this poem. Those first two lines say it all!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Do you live by the ocean, my friend? I adore it! The idea of swimming with dolphins works for me, but so does the wisdom of this poem. Those first two lines say it all!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Yes, I live on the west coast of California.
Thank you kind friend for choosing the first two lines as wise. They certainly mean so much to me.
Have a good evening.
Jesse
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If I could, I would visit! (*smile*) California is one place I wanted to see and haven't. You're very welcome.
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Smiles back at you.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This free verse poem delivers excellent inspiration to anyone who has ever experienced any type of disappointment, be it a failed relationship, loss of a job, or the rejection of a publisher. "Now you're out in the sunlight," are key words for me, meaning your future is ripe for pursuing all sorts of possibilities. I also like your final sentence which is filled with hope. The best is yet to come.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This free verse poem delivers excellent inspiration to anyone who has ever experienced any type of disappointment, be it a failed relationship, loss of a job, or the rejection of a publisher. "Now you're out in the sunlight," are key words for me, meaning your future is ripe for pursuing all sorts of possibilities. I also like your final sentence which is filled with hope. The best is yet to come.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Yes, my friend the best is yet to come.
Filled with hope and acceptance I can face anything that comes my way.
I am glad you see this as inspirational.
I like to make a difference in someone's life.
Have a good evening.
Jesse
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Awareness, slowly lets go of a relationship that was important, but is over. The next phase is to follow the dream and make it real. Reality has its potential for more dreaming.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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This poem, Awareness, slowly lets go of a relationship that was important, but is over. The next phase is to follow the dream and make it real. Reality has its potential for more dreaming.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Follow the dream and make it real. It sounds like good advice. Thanks for your insightful review. As always, reality has the potential for more dreaming.
Jesse
Comment from lancellot
Yeah, I can agree with this. Being aware and knowing the entire truth, good or bad, is far better than living in the shadows with the unknown or untruth. We can only move on, if we see everything around us and beneath us.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Yeah, I can agree with this. Being aware and knowing the entire truth, good or bad, is far better than living in the shadows with the unknown or untruth. We can only move on, if we see everything around us and beneath us.
Well done.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This is so true. Moving on can only be done when we see everything around and beneath us. The truth will set you free.
Thanks for the positive feedback.
Jesse
Comment from gramalot8
It is definitely true that many people are shy... or protected or even sheltered from outside social sources.
Sometimes it's hard to let go... both from those being protected or those being the protectors.
Hopefully each can let go snd usually everyone benefits in the long run.
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It is definitely true that many people are shy... or protected or even sheltered from outside social sources.
Sometimes it's hard to let go... both from those being protected or those being the protectors.
Hopefully each can let go snd usually everyone benefits in the long run.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
Comment from mermaids
Oh...I just love this poem! Especially your last line "to swim with dolphins where you belong". What a beautiful way to move on. You have a smooth poetic flow of words and lines that brings forth a positive feel in your poem. I like your theme of moving on, frequently we have to do that in life.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Oh...I just love this poem! Especially your last line "to swim with dolphins where you belong". What a beautiful way to move on. You have a smooth poetic flow of words and lines that brings forth a positive feel in your poem. I like your theme of moving on, frequently we have to do that in life.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Yes, we often have to move on in life. I can think of no better way to move on than to swim with dolphins.
Thanks for your kind words.
Jesse
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jesse
This free verse poem uses line breaks well to tell us that ending a relationship is hard but it has to be put behind you to get the good things in life meant for you.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Hi Jesse
This free verse poem uses line breaks well to tell us that ending a relationship is hard but it has to be put behind you to get the good things in life meant for you.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Hello Joan.
Thanks for your kind and thoughtful words.
I will keep writing and stay as healthy as I can.
Have a wonderful day.
Jesse
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You are most kindly welcome, Jesse.
Joan
Comment from Mark Jackson
I love a poem with a positive message and I feel you cannot get more positive than that; taking a moment that could be very negative and putting a positive spin on it. Great work.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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I love a poem with a positive message and I feel you cannot get more positive than that; taking a moment that could be very negative and putting a positive spin on it. Great work.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Mark, for your encouraging review.
A positive spin on life always helps things in the long run. I appreciate your kind words.
Have a great day.
Jesse
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Jesse!
I so appreciate the positivity that you express in your well-crafted poem.
I especially appreciate the following perceptive and true sentiments:
Meaningful awareness
Often comes at a cost
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Growth is coming, and I would choose to "swim with the dolphins" as well!
Thank you for sharing, Jesse!
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Good morning, Jesse!
I so appreciate the positivity that you express in your well-crafted poem.
I especially appreciate the following perceptive and true sentiments:
Meaningful awareness
Often comes at a cost
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Growth is coming, and I would choose to "swim with the dolphins" as well!
Thank you for sharing, Jesse!
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Good morning, Diane!
Wow, I'm so pleased to receive a six-star for this poem I can hardly contain my enthusiasm! You are so kind, my friend!
Yes, it often comes at a cost. Yet I choose meaningful awareness every time!
Growth is coming for both of us, I believe.
Thanks for this lovely review.
Take good care of yourself.
Jesse
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning James,
Hope you are feeling well...
Very nice thoughts behind the words of your poem...
Yes meaningful awareness is so very important.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Good morning James,
Hope you are feeling well...
Very nice thoughts behind the words of your poem...
Yes meaningful awareness is so very important.
Lisasview
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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It's always great to hear from you, Lisa.
I am doing fine thanks for asking.
How are you doing?
The thoughts behind the words are important and I appreciate you noticing this.
Have a wonderful day.
Jesse
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Your are so welcome,
Lisa
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I wish you all the best this week.
Jesse
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You too?