Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi John,
What an interesting picture that goes with the words. Was this inspired by the artwork? This is a slight gross way but truthful way to describe a French kiss. Also a groaner of a pun.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Roaming tongues, I think many of ours may have taken these paths in younger days, an excellent 5-7-5 poem, that will relate to many, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024

Thank you, Kah.
Yes roaming tongues much preferred to wagging tongues. Lol

John

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

French kissing is an intimate and passionate part of love and it is enjoyed by many couples, your poem brought it to life here, oh those roaming tongues! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Haha if those roaming tongues could only speak.... Oh wait...

Lol
John xx

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I'm really enjoyed the humor of this 575 and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely weekend and may God bless you richly with all good things. Patricia .

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

So glad you enjoyed the humour in this little offering.

Thanks the positive review, Patricia.

John