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Love poems and sweet nothings

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Comment from Carol Clark2
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Thanks for the explanation of the Monotetra. You've done it well. I like the repetition of 'let us both dare,' as well as the rhymes you used. This is a good expression of faith when life is difficult. Best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Carol. Hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from lyenochka
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I really like your mono-rhymed quatrains that affirm faith and trust in God no matter the difficulties in life. I like the saying YES to Life and Love and the unified "let us both dare." refrain against life's challenges! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Bless you, Helen.
Comment from Sally Law
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I'm in awe of all the new poetry forms I have never heard of. This monoterra is new to me. I like repeated lines. Like a child, you must repeat the important things to me so I will get it. LOL!
Love this, my friend. A virtual six for this lovely thing.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best for the faith poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    I like trying my hand at this poetry form, new to me. Thanks for your review, Sally.
Comment from BethShelby
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This is an excellent little poem. I like how it takes in the relationship between husband and wife as they work together to live life to the fullest. You are doing a wonderful job with all these poems you are writing.
Beth

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Beth, for reviewing and offering praise for my poems. Your comments mean a lot to me.
Comment from Wendy G
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Yes, one should never give up on life even when it doesn't seem fair. Sometimes it takes great effort to dare to push on, and persevere, and to dare to care - but God is the One who enables. Well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    We need to dare in life, always. Thanks for your review, Wendy.
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
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'Say Yes To Life' is a lovely poem, Ginda. It flows really well with comfortable rhyming and a strong message too. I enjoyed reading it. Well done you.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Shirley, for your kind words.