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A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry

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Comment from jessizero
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This was a great nonet. You got the syllable count right, and I loved how your poem led up to those last lines. It sounds like the painting was grand, indeed. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Jessi! Paint night is always fun! We are going Saturday night, too!
    Kim
Comment from Mark Jackson
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You should't paint turtles they should be left as nature created them. Only joking, I hope you had a good time. This is like a diary entry in the form of a nonet. I am interested; do you paint the inside of the glass? That would be a challenge.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Hi Mark!

    We did have fun. We don't paint the inside so they are safe to drink from.I use them for vases of flowers.

    Thank you for taking g the time to read and review.

    Kim
reply by Mark Jackson on 19-Apr-2024
    Thank you
Comment from lyenochka
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You are so cute! And I'm glad you are having so much fun painting! Makes me want to start painting again. Great use of alliteration and rhyme in your nonet poem!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Helen.
    We have so much fun!