Fight Within Me
Struggling18 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is nice. I read one for one. You read me. So I read you. You can get free pictures from Bing, Google, Pinterest and others. Just mention where you got the picture from in your author notes. And they are free. You can get good looking icons that way too.
Karen
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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This is nice. I read one for one. You read me. So I read you. You can get free pictures from Bing, Google, Pinterest and others. Just mention where you got the picture from in your author notes. And they are free. You can get good looking icons that way too.
Karen
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the suggestion! I appreciate your advice to get free pictures and icons. I will definitely keep that in mind for future reference. Your support means a lot.
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you can award 4 votes a month to 4 good reviewers. You have 6 #6 stars you can award every week they come on Sundays. You can fan twice a day. When you fan someone
you get their stories in your mailbox when they fan you back they get yours. One exception, when you enter a blind contest that does not go into anyone's email. :-) Karen
Comment from GoWiSt
Nicely met the line and syllable count requirements for this 5-7-5 poem type/contest.
"Fight Within Me" Uh, taking any bets? :-))
Good metaphoric imagery in shattered thoughts and fragmented mind.
Hope that wholeness comes quickly. Good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Nicely met the line and syllable count requirements for this 5-7-5 poem type/contest.
"Fight Within Me" Uh, taking any bets? :-))
Good metaphoric imagery in shattered thoughts and fragmented mind.
Hope that wholeness comes quickly. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your feedback.
I'll keep refining my verse
With your support and encouragement
I'll strive to do my best in this poetic universe.
Comment from royowen
It's terrible when one has to rebuild a sense of hope and trust again, a vision destroyed, a parable has said, Where people have no vision, they perish. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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It's terrible when one has to rebuild a sense of hope and trust again, a vision destroyed, a parable has said, Where people have no vision, they perish. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your insightful and encouraging words. Rebuilding hope and trust can be a daunting task, but your reminder of the importance of having a vision is powerful. Your blessings and well wishes are truly appreciated. Thank you, for your review Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are thought provoking, clear and creative. I found the author's descriptive words
were filled with some of the times I
go through. The poem flows and connects well.
A very well presented poem!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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The author's words are thought provoking, clear and creative. I found the author's descriptive words
were filled with some of the times I
go through. The poem flows and connects well.
A very well presented poem!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and feedback on my poem. I'm glad to hear that the imagery and flow resonated with you and that you found it thought-provoking. Your review is greatly appreciated.
Comment from nomi338
For me peace is attained by unification of thoughts marshalled by strenuous effort to unify the various elements that make me look very much like a scatterbrained idiot. Once I gain a temporary control over my thoughts, I try to get as much done as possible before the unification falls apart all over again.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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For me peace is attained by unification of thoughts marshalled by strenuous effort to unify the various elements that make me look very much like a scatterbrained idiot. Once I gain a temporary control over my thoughts, I try to get as much done as possible before the unification falls apart all over again.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for reviewing my poem.Your introspective journey to peace through unifying your scattered thoughts is relatable and highlights the ongoing challenge of maintaining inner peace. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Rebuilding is difficult to do but can be done. Thank you for the sharing this contest entry with us. I will pray that you can rebuild and find peace. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Rebuilding is difficult to do but can be done. Thank you for the sharing this contest entry with us. I will pray that you can rebuild and find peace. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your support and encouragement. Rebuilding is tough but possible. Your kind words mean a lot. Thank you for reviewing my entry.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This feeling poem starts so sad and lonesome but by the last line it sounds hopeful and that is a very good thing. Searching for wholeness to rebuild makes complete sense to me. I can relate to this 5-7-5 poem and I hope you win the contest for it since so many of us can relate to this conundrum.
Jesse
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This feeling poem starts so sad and lonesome but by the last line it sounds hopeful and that is a very good thing. Searching for wholeness to rebuild makes complete sense to me. I can relate to this 5-7-5 poem and I hope you win the contest for it since so many of us can relate to this conundrum.
Jesse
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Jesse, for your kind words on my feeling poem. I'm glad it resonated with you. Your support and well wishes for the contest mean a lot to me. Thank you! -Bunny
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You're welcome, Bunny.
Have a great weekend.
Jesse
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like your theme of wholeness to replace the struggle within. It can, indeed, be an act of building oneself up, piece by piece, a process that might take time but is infinitely worth it in the end in order to create harmony and peace. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I like your theme of wholeness to replace the struggle within. It can, indeed, be an act of building oneself up, piece by piece, a process that might take time but is infinitely worth it in the end in order to create harmony and peace. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, for your thoughtful words and encouragement. I appreciate your insight into the theme of wholeness in my work and the idea of building oneself up piece by piece. Your support means a lot to me as I strive for harmony and peace. Best of luck to you as well. Bunny
Comment from Aussie
Best wishes for your contest entry. A short poem, not so sweet. Fighting within gives no joy. It can, over time make you sick. Make a decision and stick with it. Man cannot serve two masters, he will love one and hate the other. God loves you. K x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Best wishes for your contest entry. A short poem, not so sweet. Fighting within gives no joy. It can, over time make you sick. Make a decision and stick with it. Man cannot serve two masters, he will love one and hate the other. God loves you. K x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your well wishes and insightful words, K. I appreciate your encouragement for my contest entry and your reminder to make a decision and stick with it. Your message about serving two masters and the importance of staying true to oneself resonates with me. Thank you for your support and the reminder that God loves us all. Bunny
Comment from HaleyRenae
I can feel the emotion behind your words. Tormented, yet tinged with hope. Those seventeen words painted a very clear picture and flowed nicely. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I can feel the emotion behind your words. Tormented, yet tinged with hope. Those seventeen words painted a very clear picture and flowed nicely. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me that you could feel the emotions in my writing. Your feedback gives me hope and motivation to keep writing.
