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Love is in the Air

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Love poems and sweet nothings

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Oh yes, that's it when both are sure they are right. A fun 15 syllables about the stubbornness of a standoff, but someone eventually has to give in. A fun read for poem 18 Ginda.
Cheers
Valda
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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Valda, for this and all your reviews.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol - that is a good definition of what a standoff is. It takes humility to confess that one is possibly wrong and it's so important to keep a relationship healthy.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Helen.
Comment from tfawcus
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The classic standoff! There's no solution without a degree of compromise. The tree that stands firm is broken by the storm. The negative construction of your words parallels the standoff rather well.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for your review.