Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I like this thought. Weaving takes time and thoughtful preparation - so should our speech, if we want an end-product of beauty, like a timeless priceless tapestry. Well said.
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Thanks, Wendy.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This senryu, Silken Words, has the proper formatting and compares the well-worded work with the visual artist's capture of the wild wonderful world. ..............................

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Thank you for your review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The ability with language is an amazing gift, it can destroy, ruin, but also uplift, encourage, establish, as any spoken word can. I prefer to use it to encourage, uplift but never to destroy, (although people make it hard) beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thank you for your uplifting words.

reply by royowen on 18-Apr-2024

Most welcome

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Oh my you are in a competition! A lot of these Senyru poetry entries are equally as exquisite as yours.

The world silk always takes one's brain to unique places. Most enjoyable.
D

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Yes, there are so many beautiful Senryu being offered by our FanStory family. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

A wonderful feeling behind your words here... would suggest that such a short form needs no punctuation marks as they but take away from the beautiful simplicity - the format and capitalization (if applicable) should take care of pauses and such. Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for your insights. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very beautifully written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely day. I love your choice and the poetic sound of it. Patricia .

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thanks for reviewing and for your good wishes.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A gentle few words here that bring us some peace and quiet in this loving post, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, a magical scene created here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for reviewing.