Worry About My Granddaughter
I am SO worried about this baby9 total reviews
Comment from GoWiSt
"I am SO worried about this baby" Oh my, I hope this is not autobiographical/true.
Very cute girl in that apt complementary picture art choice.
Met the line and syllable count requirements for the 5-7-5 poem type/contest.
I just read your author notes--wow! Very odd/strange and worrying, indeed. Hope you get to the bottom of this. Prayers are with y'all. Good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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"I am SO worried about this baby" Oh my, I hope this is not autobiographical/true.
Very cute girl in that apt complementary picture art choice.
Met the line and syllable count requirements for the 5-7-5 poem type/contest.
I just read your author notes--wow! Very odd/strange and worrying, indeed. Hope you get to the bottom of this. Prayers are with y'all. Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you. So sad that it is true and the little girl in the picture is the child in question. That is my granddaughter. Please keep her in your prayers and pass this along to anyone you know that prays.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
In today's society I worry about my grandchildren also. I do completely understand. Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest. If the photo is of your granddaughter, she precious.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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In today's society I worry about my grandchildren also. I do completely understand. Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest. If the photo is of your granddaughter, she precious.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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It is, thank you. Yes, Society is terrible enough without the parents putting them in more danger.
Comment from jessizero
I don't think "entwinded" is a word. Maybe it's a typo? You did get the syllable count right. My sister and I are still praying for your granddaughter and the rest of your family. Keep us posted, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I don't think "entwinded" is a word. Maybe it's a typo? You did get the syllable count right. My sister and I are still praying for your granddaughter and the rest of your family. Keep us posted, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the review and prayers. I agree, I think it is a typo. I will look into it.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I am so sorry to hear about your granddaughter. I will pray for her and her mother. I can see why you are so worried. I couldn't get it off my mind either if she was my grandchild. Very good writing.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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I am so sorry to hear about your granddaughter. I will pray for her and her mother. I can see why you are so worried. I couldn't get it off my mind either if she was my grandchild. Very good writing.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! The authorities are involved, but it just takes SO long for anything to get done that it can be very discouraging.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
My heart breaks that there is a possibility that your granddaughter could be being abused but I am sickened that nothing has been done about it yet. Especially if he has been in trouble with the law before. It makes 0 sense. What is wrong with people. And don't you think that maybe your daughter would know enough to say it is bad enough he does it to me, that he won't do it to my child. I would kill before anyone would touch one of mine. That is another reason I wondered if maybe she just got hurt. But you do need prayers regardless. So if you check your pms you will see that I bought your certificate and pumped it up to 57 cents. So you should get reviews now and people will pray once they know what a sad situation it is.
God bless and keep me updated about what you find out, dear friend. Debi
I just realized that I accidentally came back and pumped up the wrong one. I hope that is ok, as you needed them to read this too. This one tells too about the problems and I hope and pray it helps. If not I decided I am going to write something for people to say prayers for you after all. Let me know if you get this because I need to ask a couple things.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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My heart breaks that there is a possibility that your granddaughter could be being abused but I am sickened that nothing has been done about it yet. Especially if he has been in trouble with the law before. It makes 0 sense. What is wrong with people. And don't you think that maybe your daughter would know enough to say it is bad enough he does it to me, that he won't do it to my child. I would kill before anyone would touch one of mine. That is another reason I wondered if maybe she just got hurt. But you do need prayers regardless. So if you check your pms you will see that I bought your certificate and pumped it up to 57 cents. So you should get reviews now and people will pray once they know what a sad situation it is.
God bless and keep me updated about what you find out, dear friend. Debi
I just realized that I accidentally came back and pumped up the wrong one. I hope that is ok, as you needed them to read this too. This one tells too about the problems and I hope and pray it helps. If not I decided I am going to write something for people to say prayers for you after all. Let me know if you get this because I need to ask a couple things.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, my friend. Pumping up any of the stories or poems about her situation is a huge help.
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You are so welcome, Hon!
I do pray something gets resolved. Please let me know what happens.
Comment from FurryBunny
This poem masterfully conveys the overwhelming feeling of worry and pain that comes with constantly thinking about a baby. The haunting image of a mind unable to unwind and feeling entwined in danger evokes a sense of unease and concern. The 5-7-5 format adds a poignant rhythm to the poem. Well done in capturing the emotional weight of these thoughts.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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This poem masterfully conveys the overwhelming feeling of worry and pain that comes with constantly thinking about a baby. The haunting image of a mind unable to unwind and feeling entwined in danger evokes a sense of unease and concern. The 5-7-5 format adds a poignant rhythm to the poem. Well done in capturing the emotional weight of these thoughts.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
We are all keeping your granddaughter in our prayers, Monica. The situation is ridiculous and the father needs to be accidently run over a dozen times.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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We are all keeping your granddaughter in our prayers, Monica. The situation is ridiculous and the father needs to be accidently run over a dozen times.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thanks, and I completely agree.
Comment from patcelaw
No child should ever be abused. And no woman should ever be abused. If this man is abusing either or both of them, he needs to be put in prison and just stay there. Patricia , I will pray for you and for your granddaughter and her mother.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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No child should ever be abused. And no woman should ever be abused. If this man is abusing either or both of them, he needs to be put in prison and just stay there. Patricia , I will pray for you and for your granddaughter and her mother.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. My daughter has sustained several injuries, lost custody of her son due to the boyfriend's abuse, and he has been jailed and is out on bail for potentially abusing his older daughter. There has also been sexual abuse in the home. I am terrified that he will do something worse before the system does it's job. Yes, please pray and pass this along to anyone else you know that will pray for them. Thank you so much!!!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
:( There are domestic violence advocates that can consult you. As a teacher I am a mandated reporter even though I'm retired from disability. This must be upsetting. The more time that goes by, more permanent harm can happen. I can help find the right people to call. The police should remove him from the home and arrest him. I'm praying ð???
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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:( There are domestic violence advocates that can consult you. As a teacher I am a mandated reporter even though I'm retired from disability. This must be upsetting. The more time that goes by, more permanent harm can happen. I can help find the right people to call. The police should remove him from the home and arrest him. I'm praying ð???
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Alex. I, too, am a teacher retired and on disability. I have reported to every authority I can think of. Definitely, please pray and pass this along to anyone else that will pray for a resolution to this matter. I am in touch with authorities. My daughter has lost her son due to his abuse. she has sustained several injuries, this is the second injury to the 2 year old, he is out on bail for potentially abusing his other daughter, and there has even been sexual abuse in the home. Thank you for your prayers!!
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Oh Monica. I pray God will protect your daughter and granddaughter, and freeze him somehow, Spiritually so he will have no power over them.
I feel that everything will be OK. I feel your daughter is smart and has a plan.
I forgot you were like me, Friend. I know people get confused under a grip like that but she will get past this. If the guy doesn't feel threatened he might let down his guard enough to give her a minute to think. God has you in His Sight and He will make peace where there is none, He will save your girls. 🙏❤️
