Outlook
Poem 5/7/514 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I couldn't help but laugh as I read this contest entry. As if summers aren't hot enough in Texas, I read a report that Texas may have the hottest summer on record this year. Lucky me??? I enjoyed reading your entry and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I couldn't help but laugh as I read this contest entry. As if summers aren't hot enough in Texas, I read a report that Texas may have the hottest summer on record this year. Lucky me??? I enjoyed reading your entry and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Great review and thanks for sharing ! zanya
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I like this poem. Some of the words stand out to me like: amid golden hues and April sunset is pledge. The picture is a good choice to go with the poem. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I like this poem. Some of the words stand out to me like: amid golden hues and April sunset is pledge. The picture is a good choice to go with the poem. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Written with a masterful paintbrush, delivering a beautiful image to go along with the promise of summer days. The is a super entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Written with a masterful paintbrush, delivering a beautiful image to go along with the promise of summer days. The is a super entry for the 5-7-5 contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, zanya!
Oh! Yes!
And how I am longing for those summer days here in norther Michigan!
Your sentiments and presentation resonate deeply with me.
Beautiful rendering!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Good morning, zanya!
Oh! Yes!
And how I am longing for those summer days here in norther Michigan!
Your sentiments and presentation resonate deeply with me.
Beautiful rendering!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Great review & roll on Summer! zanya
Comment from Sanku
This is a beautiful picture of sunset .What the golden hued sunset pledges are many hot summer days. This is well expressed The syllable count is correct .You may put a ~ mark at the end of the second line..
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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This is a beautiful picture of sunset .What the golden hued sunset pledges are many hot summer days. This is well expressed The syllable count is correct .You may put a ~ mark at the end of the second line..
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, zanya.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A very good opening line sets the scene.
-The second line establishes the time of year
and also the time of day.
-A good follow up in the last line indicating
summer can't be too far behind.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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-Nice image and presentation, zanya.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-A very good opening line sets the scene.
-The second line establishes the time of year
and also the time of day.
-A good follow up in the last line indicating
summer can't be too far behind.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Great review zanya
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You are very welcome, zanya, I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Outlook, has the proper formatting (accepting the word "Midst" as opposed to "amid") and sees the April sun as a promise of future days of pleasant weather.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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This 5-7-5, Outlook, has the proper formatting (accepting the word "Midst" as opposed to "amid") and sees the April sun as a promise of future days of pleasant weather.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Ulla
Yes, Zanya, the promise is certainly there of a very hot summer to come. We have all the signs here in Spain already. I loved your 5-7-5 poem. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Yes, Zanya, the promise is certainly there of a very hot summer to come. We have all the signs here in Spain already. I loved your 5-7-5 poem. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing - roll on Summer ! zanya
Comment from GoWiSt
"Midst golden hues" This is only 4 syllables, I believe. Perhaps, change Midst to Admist?
Indeed, the brighter sunshine in April/spring heralds a sizzling summer to come. Good outlook to have. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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"Midst golden hues" This is only 4 syllables, I believe. Perhaps, change Midst to Admist?
Indeed, the brighter sunshine in April/spring heralds a sizzling summer to come. Good outlook to have. Good luck!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing & spotting syllable count - much appreciated zanya
Comment from lyenochka
I love the word "pledge" here. It is a promise of warmth to come. And after a long and icy winter, it is a welcome thought to think of hot days - but not too hot! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I love the word "pledge" here. It is a promise of warmth to come. And after a long and icy winter, it is a welcome thought to think of hot days - but not too hot! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Yes the chilly winter days are coming to a close, let's hope! Thanks for reviewing zanya
