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Love is in the Air

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Love poems and sweet nothings

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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.This is a lovely Naani poem for day 16, Ginda and a gorgeous photo of your husband and grandies. I love the reference to the hands, one seen lots of years and hard work the others, just starting out in life. Very nice,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Valda, for your kind words for my poem.
Comment from Wendy G
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I love the image as well as the words. the focus on the hands reminds one of generational differences, but also of the closeness of the relationship between old and young. Very lovely, and quite moving.
Wendy

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Wendy, for your review. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a lovely Naani. It evokes great emotion in the reader. I appreciate the explanation of the form. The contrast is good between the hands of the grandfather and those of the children. Blessings as you continue NaPoWriMo. Carol

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Carol.
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for sharing this lovely photo of your olive grove! What a blessing to see our husbands grow into the loving grandfathers. I like how you compared the differences in those hands.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Helen. I love this picture and the memories of when they were so little.
Comment from zanya
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This poem lauds and celebrates love between the generations- grandfather and grand children - gentle and abiding and caring - a beautiful photo and thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your sweet, caring words.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Ginda,
What a wonderful photo to write about. The words do the photo justice. This is a poem of love on your part and on theirs. It is good that he shares this beauty with his grandchildren.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in writing a poem a day this month.
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Joan. Enjoy your week too.