Love is in the Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "A Long, Long Time"Love poems and sweet nothings
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Comment from Mark Jackson
I really like this it is funny, very quirky. I am unsure about the form so this might be bad advice. The break needs to be right at the end of this poem which would be sensible for the joke. That would be 4 lines and 1 line. Does that break the rules of the Septolet though?
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I really like this it is funny, very quirky. I am unsure about the form so this might be bad advice. The break needs to be right at the end of this poem which would be sensible for the joke. That would be 4 lines and 1 line. Does that break the rules of the Septolet though?
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I see what you mean and I agree, but the septolet is divided in half.
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Shame. It doesn't matter really.
Comment from lyenochka
Now you got me curious! I had to do some calculations and even 50 years together would only add up to 18,000+ nights so I can only guess the narrator and beloved have been together over 55 years! Wow!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Now you got me curious! I had to do some calculations and even 50 years together would only add up to 18,000+ nights so I can only guess the narrator and beloved have been together over 55 years! Wow!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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19,280 to be exact. I had to round up for the sake of syllables, so I guess this includes some of the time we were engaged. Wow is right!
