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Wings of Gossamer

Summer Haiku

7 total reviews 
Comment from nancyjam
Excellent
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A wonderful Haiku which presents lovely images of butterflies and flowers as well as fragrance, to give the reader a sense of a warm summer day.
A Haiku like this is a gift to the reader. Thanks for sharing.
Nancy

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    I?m happy you enjoyed my poem on the delicate beauty of butterflies who grace our yards in the summer months. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent
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beautiful summer haiku, it's a good kigo choice
i love the presentation and imagery
thank you for participating
good syllables count and connection between lines

gypsy

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    I?m happy you enjoyed my poem on the delicate beauty of butterflies who grace our yards in the summer months. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Really very nice overall presentation! Excellent entry for the club contest.

I look forward to that scent!

Each line has its own beauty. I too have used your selected FanArtist for my postings.

Mark

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Excellent
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A lovely Haiku with delightful descriptions that bring it to life and a surprise rhyme. The artwork really adds to the presentation of the poem. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    I?m happy you enjoyed my poem on the delicate beauty of butterflies who grace our yards in the summer months. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
Excellent
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I'm very seldom review a post that is only worth two cents, but this post is so striking and its beauty with the image that you used and with the text that you used that it made it impossible for me not to review this work. A very fine piece of work I must say. Patricia.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    I?m glad you enjoyed the read. Thank you for dropping by to share your thoughts. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You brought aromatic sweet perfume and colour in this breezy Haiku for the club and I just wanted to jump into this spring filled poem and bask inside this world filled with gossamer fluttering. Butterflies and peonies are big favourites, an ambient post June, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    I?m glad you enjoyed this summer haiku - cannot wait for the return of my delicate beauties! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is the sweetest haiku inspiring the reader with, not only an eye-catching visual, but also sensations of touch and smell, all packaged up in a delightful presentation. A great entry for the club, June. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    I?m glad you enjoyed this summer haiku - cannot wait for the return of my delicate beauties! Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts.