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Engaging Growth

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A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Nicely written Etheree about the long wait for spring to begin. We can see the snowflakes on the ashphalt, and t does make for a pretty picture, but I'm glad to only see it in pictures. Hope it stops snowing soon for you, Kim.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Hi Valda!
    We hit 69F degrees yesterday. Things are melting! Hoping the fresh snowfall is over until next season!

    Kim
Comment from Sallyo
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How odd to be reading about a lingering winter when we're in the precise middle of autumn. I like the form. I'd heard of it before but had never taken much notice. The twist of humour at the end lifts it nicely.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Hi Sally!

    We are hoping for actual Spring soon! Of course, there is a song... When It's Springtime in Alaska It's 40 Below.

    We had that weather in January. Thanks for a great review.

    Kim
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Share a photo poetry contest. Oh my goodness, you have to be made from tough stock to handle such long, cold seasons. Nice photo to go with your engaging poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh dear! Another snow day even in April. It must feel like spring is taking forever there. I heard it snowed in other parts of the US recently. Hope it warms up soon. Best wishes in the Photo contest! Nice job with the nonet.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thanks Helen!

    I hear it may warm up by the end of the week.
Comment from jessizero
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It's still snowing??? Wow. I liked your poem. I especially liked your rhymes. The picture you included was great, too. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Hi Jessi!

    I live in Alaska. We always have snow in April. I am just ready for Spring! :) Thank you for the lovely comments.
    Kim
Comment from royowen
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I think you live in Alaska I think, where things could be a little dicey concerning the weather couldn't they? Spring can be variable and unstable here where the winters are usually mild and snowless, a beautifully written etheree, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Hi Roy!

    Yes, I am in Alaska. Temperature and conditions can be quite variable. I am just ready for Spring lol
    Thank you for the kind review.
    Kim
reply by royowen on 14-Apr-2024
    I?m sure