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The Rabbit Hole

Day to day mood management struggles of this writer.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-hundred-word story, The Rabbit Hole, has the proper word count and becomes the end all and be all of the young author's existence, as she becomes part of her system.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
    Thank you Bill :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile and disappearing into mountains of paper sounds like he drowning of a potential novelist! A fun post and I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    thank you, Dolly, much appreciated, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from patcelaw
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Sometimes in this world of disarray we all find that we have times that we feel like we're going down a rabbit hole. I wish you the very best with your writing and may you not have too many crumpled sheets of paper in your trash. Patricia .

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    thanks, Patricia, much appreciated
Comment from royowen
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Heh heh, I like this, it has a unique ending, and as it would have it, a rabbit hole appeared and someone seems to have been swallowed up, well dine, a great post, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    I am glad this idea came to me for a 100-word flash fiction, I feel like if it was longer, a rabbit hole was likely :), thank you for the review.
reply by royowen on 14-Apr-2024
    Well done