fools optimism
pessimistic attitude born from poor experiences4 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
First poem? Great job. I think you placed the rhymes nicely as they do not seemed forced at all as many do in poems.
You should certainly keep at it with poetry. Good luck in the Mi Ute Poetry Contest.
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First poem? Great job. I think you placed the rhymes nicely as they do not seemed forced at all as many do in poems.
You should certainly keep at it with poetry. Good luck in the Mi Ute Poetry Contest.
D
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from royowen
Firstly, welcome to fanstory, you'll have a good time here. This is beautifully written, an excellent post, you have only 7 syllables in line I, five syllables in line four, seven syllable in line 4, seven syllables in line 5, the format is 8444 8444 8444, otherwise you'll be disqualified, good attempt, blessings Roy
Typo : isolation(')s a blessing 2 : disguised (with) pain. By?
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Firstly, welcome to fanstory, you'll have a good time here. This is beautifully written, an excellent post, you have only 7 syllables in line I, five syllables in line four, seven syllable in line 4, seven syllables in line 5, the format is 8444 8444 8444, otherwise you'll be disqualified, good attempt, blessings Roy
Typo : isolation(')s a blessing 2 : disguised (with) pain. By?
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You're preaching to the choir, but I learned many years ago that Love does not hurt if something feels bad it's not love. And if someone is optimistic they're not a fool. Being optimistic and seeing in a way out is the only way out.
Best wishes.
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You're preaching to the choir, but I learned many years ago that Love does not hurt if something feels bad it's not love. And if someone is optimistic they're not a fool. Being optimistic and seeing in a way out is the only way out.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual minute poem and I wish you luck with it and welcome to Fanstory. I think we are either born pessimists or optimists in this world and we have to deal with it, love Dolly x x x
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An unusual minute poem and I wish you luck with it and welcome to Fanstory. I think we are either born pessimists or optimists in this world and we have to deal with it, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
