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Love is in the Air

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Love poems and sweet nothings

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Wise to do the NaPoWriMo 2024 challenge and a contest entry at with the same poem. I enjoyed reading. Yes, newborns do burrow into our hearts immediately. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 11-May-2024


reply by the author on 15-May-2024
    Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from Julie Helms
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A wonderful poem of a miraculous event! I recently just got my first grandchild and wondered anew at Gods perfect creation. "Echoes of our love" is a beautiful description of conception.
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Julie.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Ginda,

This Is an absolutely adorable poem and image. his topper well-chosen words make this a beautiful poem, and I enjoyed reviewing it. My baby's daughter is thirty-one and a mother of three herself. Many blessings to you and yours.

Alex :)

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Alex, for your kind words.
Comment from BethShelby
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Beautiful. There is nothing like holding that new baby in your arms. All of them are special but that first one is a awesome memory that will never leave you. This is excellent for the congest.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Beth.
Comment from royowen
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My first born was a stunningly beautiful and perfect little girl, and as it turned so was our second born. It was a bonus which we weren't expecting, but nevertheless God blessed ud, because of His great love, beautifully written Ginda, great job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Roy, for the kindness of your words. And your blessings too.
reply by royowen on 17-Apr-2024
    Well done
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Wow! This is really quite beautiful. By poem twelve, I would be out of ideas, probably writing about bubble gum stuck to my shoe.

Nice work. Keep found!
D

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from June Sargent
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There is nothing as strong or as beautiful as a mother's love. Your short poem captures the essence of joy at seeing your child for the first time. And hearing her tiny heartbeats. Echoes of love that last a lifetime.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thanks, June, for your sweet review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Isn't it just miraculous when we see that newborn baby to love? They seem to have come fresh from our Heavenly Father's Hands and so beautiful that we are all charmed and drawn to love! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Helen, for reviewing this little poem.
Comment from Wendy G
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It's always amazing how perfect this miniature human being is. Yes, a product of love, and an echo of it. Lovely expression. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Wendy.
Comment from jessizero
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This 5-7-5 poem for the contest was so sweet! I admire the "wee breaths" and "tiny heartbeats," and your syllable count is correct. The poem is adorable. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thanks for your very nice review.