Our Hands, Eyes, Legs, And Knees
We use them so many times.11 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, our body parts are used all the time. Each of the mentioned parts can all be used to pray and praise God. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Yes, our body parts are used all the time. Each of the mentioned parts can all be used to pray and praise God. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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You are welcome.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a nice poem. The picture of the child goes well your words. I like how you used parts of our bodies in the poem. I think sometimes we don't realize how much we do with our bodies Very good job
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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What a nice poem. The picture of the child goes well your words. I like how you used parts of our bodies in the poem. I think sometimes we don't realize how much we do with our bodies Very good job
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks!
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is very quaint and pleasant to read. It meets the requirements of the minute poem mostly Innocent and mild Is slightly out; easy fix though with the poet's 'n' as syllables need vowels in order to be counted. Good Luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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That is very quaint and pleasant to read. It meets the requirements of the minute poem mostly Innocent and mild Is slightly out; easy fix though with the poet's 'n' as syllables need vowels in order to be counted. Good Luck with the competition.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
First off you chose a beautiful pic to illustrate your poem.
I spent time finding the right artwork so I appreciate if others do too.
I love the simplicity , a delightful poem for children to learn about the 5 senses and how we can put to good use our limbs.
PS . Some people will smell with their nose
A pretty nose.
To me this line doesn't flow so well .
Just a suggestion, but no pressure :
Our nose captures the sweet scent of a pretty rose.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Ciao !
First off you chose a beautiful pic to illustrate your poem.
I spent time finding the right artwork so I appreciate if others do too.
I love the simplicity , a delightful poem for children to learn about the 5 senses and how we can put to good use our limbs.
PS . Some people will smell with their nose
A pretty nose.
To me this line doesn't flow so well .
Just a suggestion, but no pressure :
Our nose captures the sweet scent of a pretty rose.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the six stars I really appreciate it.
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The line flows very well
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Fair enough . 👌
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Your line, not correct syllables.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Minute Poetry Contest. A lovely poem that counts the ways we use our senses and body parts every day without really paying attention. We are blessed if we still have all these functions later in life and need to remember to be thankful for them. At least that is my take away from this piece. :-) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Minute Poetry Contest. A lovely poem that counts the ways we use our senses and body parts every day without really paying attention. We are blessed if we still have all these functions later in life and need to remember to be thankful for them. At least that is my take away from this piece. :-) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thanks!
Comment from Janet Foor
A sweet and tender picture to the capture the essence of this lovely Minute poem. I like the progression through each stanza.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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A sweet and tender picture to the capture the essence of this lovely Minute poem. I like the progression through each stanza.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thanks very much, Janet!
Comment from GoWiSt
Nice complementary picture art choice. I feel the child's pious repose.
Met the line and syllable count requirements for this poem type/contest. Good luck.
Indeed, we should use our bodies--all its parts--to our mutual good and glory of God.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Nice complementary picture art choice. I feel the child's pious repose.
Met the line and syllable count requirements for this poem type/contest. Good luck.
Indeed, we should use our bodies--all its parts--to our mutual good and glory of God.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I have never tried a minute poem. It's a little too tough for me. You have come up with a really good effort, Darla. The third stanza is really good.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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I have never tried a minute poem. It's a little too tough for me. You have come up with a really good effort, Darla. The third stanza is really good.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thanks. I was worried about you. I guess it isn't good enough for six stars.
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Don't feel bad about not getting six stars from me. I give out six stars about once a month.
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I just thought it was worth six stars because you said I put up a really good effort.
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I hope to give you six stars some day, and when I do, you will know that you have produced something that is really good.
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You already gave me six stars
one day.
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That must have been a good day. Now let's get to work on that second six star rating.
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I work hard on all my poems
Comment from jessizero
I think "innocent and mild" might be one syllable too many, but I could be miscounting. Still, you might want to double-check it. I enjoyed your minute poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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I think "innocent and mild" might be one syllable too many, but I could be miscounting. Still, you might want to double-check it. I enjoyed your minute poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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No the syllables are correct.
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Okay. Sorry to bug you.
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That it's fine.
Thanks for your review
Comment from tfawcus
How lucky we are to have five senses and lithe limbs with which to enjoy this wonderful world. Your Minute poem gives due acknowledgement to the fact. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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How lucky we are to have five senses and lithe limbs with which to enjoy this wonderful world. Your Minute poem gives due acknowledgement to the fact. Nicely done.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thanks very much
