Engaging Growth
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Walking Creamer's Field"A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry
6 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I did enjoy both this style of yours, Kim and also the lovely descriptions. Even in Alaska Spring brings out Nature's beauty. When I say even, it's because I always think of the snowy months. Nice presentation and good luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
  |
I did enjoy both this style of yours, Kim and also the lovely descriptions. Even in Alaska Spring brings out Nature's beauty. When I say even, it's because I always think of the snowy months. Nice presentation and good luck in the contest.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
-
Hi Valda!
We are still getting fresh snow. I always enjoy hearing from you. I hope all is well!
Kim
Comment from lyenochka
This a cool poetic form! And I like how you started and ended with the same two lines in a swapped order. Yes, the birds singing always brings us hope!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
|
This a cool poetic form! And I like how you started and ended with the same two lines in a swapped order. Yes, the birds singing always brings us hope!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
-
Hi Helen!
Creamer's Field is one of my favorite places for walking. I can't wait for the trails to melt and dry. Watching the birds brings me peace.
Kim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought all the delights of spring into your fine poem here and I enjoyed the format, rhymes and magical alliteration in your inventive poem, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
|
You brought all the delights of spring into your fine poem here and I enjoyed the format, rhymes and magical alliteration in your inventive poem, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reading your poem it was very effective and full of imagery. I could relate to your poem and I'm sure many others will too. It's very well written and the photo images truly support your words.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
|
I enjoyed reading your poem it was very effective and full of imagery. I could relate to your poem and I'm sure many others will too. It's very well written and the photo images truly support your words.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Alex!
-
You're welcome!
Comment from Sallyo
I did indeed enjoy this style, but I imagine it must be a pretty difficult one to emulate. I loved the consonance that fits in with so many of the rhymes, and the concept of the eternal spring.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
|
I did indeed enjoy this style, but I imagine it must be a pretty difficult one to emulate. I loved the consonance that fits in with so many of the rhymes, and the concept of the eternal spring.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Sally. I appreciate the kind comments.
Kim
Comment from Douglas Goff
I found this format to be very descriptive and full of imagery.
Your words actually helped me to visual the entire scene and make me want to be there. That is a talent!
D
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
|
I found this format to be very descriptive and full of imagery.
Your words actually helped me to visual the entire scene and make me want to be there. That is a talent!
D
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
-
Thank you, Douglas. What a wonderful compliment.
Kim