Going Home
A dreamer's soul coming home6 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I love this beautiful free verse. it brings peace to ones mind picturing
the soul listening to God's calling it home.
Beautiful imagery. I'd like to bookcase it and come back to it when i need peace of mind. Thanks so much for sharing.
Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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I love this beautiful free verse. it brings peace to ones mind picturing
the soul listening to God's calling it home.
Beautiful imagery. I'd like to bookcase it and come back to it when i need peace of mind. Thanks so much for sharing.
Nancy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Nancy, I would be honored. That is why I write to bring a smile to someone's heart. Thank you. :)
Comment from R. Lynn Collett
This is a nice bit of free verse! I can see it used to honor someone who has passed. I am one who appreciates punctuation, and I'm glad you used it! I might suggest using past tense or present tense, but not switching between them. The poetry feels peaceful. It's soothing to read!
:) R.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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This is a nice bit of free verse! I can see it used to honor someone who has passed. I am one who appreciates punctuation, and I'm glad you used it! I might suggest using past tense or present tense, but not switching between them. The poetry feels peaceful. It's soothing to read!
:) R.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you, R. Lynn. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Switching is one of my faults.
Comment from dragonpoet
HI
This is a well done free verse about a conversation with God/Jesus. It seems it is a soul getting directions to Heaven by starlight.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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HI
This is a well done free verse about a conversation with God/Jesus. It seems it is a soul getting directions to Heaven by starlight.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Joan. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. You have a beautiful week.
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Don't mention it, pw. I did enjoy it.
Thanks.
Joan
Comment from jessizero
I absolutely loved the way you used bold and italics to point out the differences in who is speaking. Your last line, "I am home," was wonderful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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I absolutely loved the way you used bold and italics to point out the differences in who is speaking. Your last line, "I am home," was wonderful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Jessi. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is really good. The problem is I am reading all the entries for the free verse competition and they are all so good except one. I am afraid, I am going to have to vote for that one. Otherwise, I might not get a vote at all. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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That is really good. The problem is I am reading all the entries for the free verse competition and they are all so good except one. I am afraid, I am going to have to vote for that one. Otherwise, I might not get a vote at all. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Mark. :) There are a lot of great poets. I'm just fair. :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
I love the peacefulness and the sense of calm and belonging as one's life ends and eternity begins. I also really like the way you have presented your words, the placement of each line and the varying size and font is effective.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
I love the peacefulness and the sense of calm and belonging as one's life ends and eternity begins. I also really like the way you have presented your words, the placement of each line and the varying size and font is effective.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Debra. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
