Love is in the Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Love Diamond"Love poems and sweet nothings
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love the descriptive alliteration in the 3rd and 5th lines of Antonym Diamente Ginda, and you achieved a good diamond shape too in your Love versus Lust poem. Well done,
valda
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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I love the descriptive alliteration in the 3rd and 5th lines of Antonym Diamente Ginda, and you achieved a good diamond shape too in your Love versus Lust poem. Well done,
valda
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for your nice review.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Nice job on this Antonym Diamante. You've used good alliteration in your choice of verbs, and each one fits well with its noun. The adjectives are perfect descriptors of the two nouns. Thanks for the explanation of the form. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Nice job on this Antonym Diamante. You've used good alliteration in your choice of verbs, and each one fits well with its noun. The adjectives are perfect descriptors of the two nouns. Thanks for the explanation of the form. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Carol, for your kind words. This one was a challenge, so I especially appreciate the stars.
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You're welcome. Well done.
Comment from Sally Law
Ginda dear,
This is wonderful in a very challenging form. Beautifully written and illustrated Antonym Diamante of the two sided coin: love and lust. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Ginda dear,
This is wonderful in a very challenging form. Beautifully written and illustrated Antonym Diamante of the two sided coin: love and lust. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the contest.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Sally. I appreciate your thoughts and good wishes.
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My pleasure as always.
Sal :)) xo
Comment from Mega Humongous
Although the format is used correctly, I find the adjectives used in this poem to be lacking in depth and imagination. There are so many more interesting thoughts and ideas that encompass love, that can be said with 1 word.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Although the format is used correctly, I find the adjectives used in this poem to be lacking in depth and imagination. There are so many more interesting thoughts and ideas that encompass love, that can be said with 1 word.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Interesting review
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your diamante poem and you contrast love versus lust very clearly. Love focuses on the beloved but lust focuses on the desires of the self.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Great job with your diamante poem and you contrast love versus lust very clearly. Love focuses on the beloved but lust focuses on the desires of the self.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Helen.