Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Very nice story. Is it 'hostorical' fiction?
...vivid portrayal of the Rome, - maybe not the 'the'?
Richard realized he enjoyed the writing process,... - Some reviewers have told me that I need a 'that' before 'he'. I like it our way!
Eva was a student that was in two of his classes - (who was)
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024

Thanks for the catch. I will edit.

Comment from DREAMCHILD78

Excellent

Beautiful story. Well written and totally enjoyed. It is rewarding to see a human do what they enjoy doing. It reminds readers of what is most important in the life.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for the read and review. So pleased you liked the story.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I'm glad I read this! Mr. History's story was entertaining and inspiring. I am glad he found his calling and that he is still teaching, in a way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024

Thanks so much for the read and review. So pleased you liked the story.