Trips
A fun lune about travel.2 total reviews
Comment from Mark Jackson
You have played with words a little there all roads lead to Rome, which rhymes with home. It is very simple and very effective. I like it on four main levels or directions of travel. Although East is my favourite a star for most but 2 for east.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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You have played with words a little there all roads lead to Rome, which rhymes with home. It is very simple and very effective. I like it on four main levels or directions of travel. Although East is my favourite a star for most but 2 for east.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Hi Mark Jackson!
Thank you for the excellent review and the feedback. I appreciate that you took the time to read my Lune and make comments. Have a blessed week!
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this lune poem on travel. You got the syllable count correct, and your message was wonderful. I like that all roads lead home. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed this lune poem on travel. You got the syllable count correct, and your message was wonderful. I like that all roads lead home. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Hi jessizero!
Thank you for the excellent review and the feedback. I appreciate that you took the time to read my Lune and make comments. Have a blessed week!
