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Two Heron

Two heron flying very low over a creek.

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Comment from RodG
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I can easily visualize these two herons flying over the "leaf-floating" creek.
Nice metaphor of the "scarecrow legs" to describe birds' legs.
Congrats on your first milestone here at FanStory.
Rod

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

Comment from jessizero
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Congratulations on your first milestone post, and welcome to FanStory! I enjoyed your lune poem. You got the syllable count right, and the poem itself was a great mental image of nature. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024