Love is in the Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Faraway Future"Love poems and sweet nothings
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Comment from Mark Jackson
I like the form not heard of it before, only read it once and did not notice the repeating line. Now I have read it twice and obviously know the repeating line is there I am left with a sad feeling. I am not sure but I thought you would want it to have a happy ending. But the negativity of your repeating line makes me feel that this is a failed marriage : You could not say love is strong; you could not say stay by my side. Thanks for sharing it i a great read.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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I like the form not heard of it before, only read it once and did not notice the repeating line. Now I have read it twice and obviously know the repeating line is there I am left with a sad feeling. I am not sure but I thought you would want it to have a happy ending. But the negativity of your repeating line makes me feel that this is a failed marriage : You could not say love is strong; you could not say stay by my side. Thanks for sharing it i a great read.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Sally Law
This is magnificent, my friend! I'm sick for a six to give you. I didn't realize you were in the NaPoWriMo contest either. I better fan you now so I don't miss. Just beautiful! Sending you my best today as always and best for the book.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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This is magnificent, my friend! I'm sick for a six to give you. I didn't realize you were in the NaPoWriMo contest either. I better fan you now so I don't miss. Just beautiful! Sending you my best today as always and best for the book.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Sally. Your positive remarks are so encouraging and appreciated.
