Daylight Darkness
A 5-7-5 Poem20 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wonderfully written -- love the play on words at the end there! We only had a partial here, but my students thought it was awesome! Of course, it did get them out of class... lol!
Thanx for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Wonderfully written -- love the play on words at the end there! We only had a partial here, but my students thought it was awesome! Of course, it did get them out of class... lol!
Thanx for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. I hope the darkness wouldn't last too long. Did you see it? I will try to see it next time. I'm busy having fun in my lake condo. I have friends who fly over to somewhere to see it. I might try to go to Iceland again in 2026 to see one.
Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Yes. I hope the darkness wouldn't last too long. Did you see it? I will try to see it next time. I'm busy having fun in my lake condo. I have friends who fly over to somewhere to see it. I might try to go to Iceland again in 2026 to see one.
Well done.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from John Ciarmello
It's so true in so many different ways. We all love events like this, and your piece has a symbolic flare, which I'm not sure was intentional but was interesting nonetheless. Beautiful artwork here.
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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It's so true in so many different ways. We all love events like this, and your piece has a symbolic flare, which I'm not sure was intentional but was interesting nonetheless. Beautiful artwork here.
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your 5/7/5 poem and excellent picture presentation supporting-
Poem gives a focused view of the recent eclipse-
Wearing glasses to protect from the direct sun light / and then the darkness of the full eclipse- nicely done -Bless AP
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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I like your 5/7/5 poem and excellent picture presentation supporting-
Poem gives a focused view of the recent eclipse-
Wearing glasses to protect from the direct sun light / and then the darkness of the full eclipse- nicely done -Bless AP
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpotT
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This is the third poem in a row about the eclipse. Yours is beautiful and the presentation too. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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This is the third poem in a row about the eclipse. Yours is beautiful and the presentation too. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Kahpot, your poem is filled with good imagery. Of special note:
the darkest of days
(It may have been one of the darkest days, but it was also one of the brightest days ever because the Eclipse brought people together in peace and harmony.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. Margaret
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Hi Kahpot, your poem is filled with good imagery. Of special note:
the darkest of days
(It may have been one of the darkest days, but it was also one of the brightest days ever because the Eclipse brought people together in peace and harmony.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. Margaret
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, yes, it would have been amazing, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from judiverse
Wasn't it amazing to see? I sat out in the driveway and watched. It was a wonder. Your 5-7-5 described it beautifully, and that's a great picture. The darkness didn't last very long. That's something to think about. It something the children who saw it will never forget. Just think how many millions of people were doing the same thing--wearing their glasses and looking at the eclipse. judi
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Wasn't it amazing to see? I sat out in the driveway and watched. It was a wonder. Your 5-7-5 described it beautifully, and that's a great picture. The darkness didn't last very long. That's something to think about. It something the children who saw it will never forget. Just think how many millions of people were doing the same thing--wearing their glasses and looking at the eclipse. judi
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Judi, yes, it would have been amazing, though not here in AUS. as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jessizero
This was a great 5-7-5 poem on the eclipse. You got the syllable count right, and I loved how you used "shades of glass." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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This was a great 5-7-5 poem on the eclipse. You got the syllable count right, and I loved how you used "shades of glass." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, a well written 5-7-5 poem for the contest. It captures the event very well. A total eclipse is indeed the darkest of days. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Hi there, a well written 5-7-5 poem for the contest. It captures the event very well. A total eclipse is indeed the darkest of days. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
I think the shades were made of plastic but I know what you mean. It was fun to see so many people looking up and enjoying this marvelous wonder of the alignment of Earth, Moon, and Sun. It was only a brief darkness! I hope you get to see an eclipse there someday. I couldn't from here - not this year.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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I think the shades were made of plastic but I know what you mean. It was fun to see so many people looking up and enjoying this marvelous wonder of the alignment of Earth, Moon, and Sun. It was only a brief darkness! I hope you get to see an eclipse there someday. I couldn't from here - not this year.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, yes, I think/sure they are, a bit 3D I think, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
