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Beautiful Sights And Sounds

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Comment from Ginda Simpson
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I can perfectly see why these things are among the many sights and sounds that bring you joy. They work well for your lune poetry entry. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from bob cullen
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This picture confirms my favourite theory. There is nothing as awesome as Mother Nature when she turns on a display. A thunderstorm with lightening, a cyclone, an earthquake or even something as simple as a swaying tree. Guess it makes you wonder, Who, is directing all these masterpieces? That name is GOD. Sorry Director, I don't have a six left.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Bob, it sounds like you would give me six stars if you had it, thanks!
reply by bob cullen on 09-Apr-2024
    To me it sounded like a politician, promising what he has no intention of delivering. I would like to believe I have my honorable intentions than that. Thank you again.
Comment from jessizero
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There really are so many beautiful sights and sounds, and you captured a few of them here. I like that you brought that last line about fireworks to life with the picture of fireworks. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
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Darla, This is a very beautiful Lune. You used very good descriptive words and very nice picture your husband took. Best wishes in the contest my friend. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Thanks for the six stars!
reply by Teri7 on 09-Apr-2024
    You are so welcome! I hope you have a blessed night!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Yes I just turned 57.
reply by Teri7 on 09-Apr-2024
    I hope you had a very lovely birthday! I am 67 and my husband is 68. You are just a young lady! love you Darla!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
    Thanks, I love you too.
reply by Teri7 on 10-Apr-2024
    I am so glad we met on here! I hope you have a day full of many blessings!
Comment from mermaids
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I like the combination of sounds you describe in your poem. It is true there are son many beautiful sights and sounds to mention. The pic of the fireworks is beautiful.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Thanks very much!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Lune poetry Contest. Three great examples of beautiful sights and sounds in our world. Don't be afraid to increase your font size and show off your writing! You don't want your words to get lost on the page. The photo is lovely. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    I couldn't increase my font size, but the poem is easy to read.
Comment from GoWiSt
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Nice complementary picture art choice.
Indeed, indeed, the three descriptions in your poem are of beautiful sights and sounds.
Successfully fulfilled the line and syllable count requirements of the poem type/contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Debra White
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Hello Pookietoo :)
Your poem is in perfect syllable count for the contest.
I like the repeated 'ch' sound in 'chimes' and 'child's'.
Lovely photograph - your husband caught the shot perfectly.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Debra.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You brought some sparks into my mind with your selection of words for the Lune contest, special moments we enjoy from time to time, good luck with the contest, there have been some amazing entries, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    Thank you! I don't know how you see entries in a cash contest.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 09-Apr-2024
    They are all available to read prior to the committee review x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
    I only know how to find the ones you vote on.
Comment from Julie Helms
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Your short lune gives us an array of sights in the dazzling fireworks, and sounds with the chimes and laughter. You covered a lot in a very brief format. Nicely done!
Julie

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Thank you!