Engaging Growth
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "New Beginnings "A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, that's exactly what we need for new beginnings. I like to think prayer also helps. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Yes, that's exactly what we need for new beginnings. I like to think prayer also helps. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
It sounds simple but it's often a harder task as in life, sunshine and love, and raindrops on new growth to encourage new beginnings. Nicely done with your Lune poem Kim.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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It sounds simple but it's often a harder task as in life, sunshine and love, and raindrops on new growth to encourage new beginnings. Nicely done with your Lune poem Kim.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Valda!
Comment from Julie Helms
A good recipe for growing! So simple, and yet an incredibly complex process, reflected in this brief format poem.
Because this is a lune, I would recommend either right aligning it or left aligning it. The name is based on the crescent moon, which is supposed to be reflected in the shape of the poem. Center aligning doesn't have that effect.
Nicely done!
Julie
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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A good recipe for growing! So simple, and yet an incredibly complex process, reflected in this brief format poem.
Because this is a lune, I would recommend either right aligning it or left aligning it. The name is based on the crescent moon, which is supposed to be reflected in the shape of the poem. Center aligning doesn't have that effect.
Nicely done!
Julie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Julie.
Nice suggestion!
Kim
Comment from Douglas Goff
Interesting topic for the impending season. Let's hope this process brightens our future!
I, mused, have never wrote a Lune. Great job and good luck in the Lune Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Interesting topic for the impending season. Let's hope this process brightens our future!
I, mused, have never wrote a Lune. Great job and good luck in the Lune Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Douglas.
Comment from lyenochka
Now that's a growth that we can see with our eyes in a short time. And it works metaphorically in the garden of life planting seeds of love and watering with encouragement. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Now that's a growth that we can see with our eyes in a short time. And it works metaphorically in the garden of life planting seeds of love and watering with encouragement. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Hi Helen!
Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Comment from jessizero
This was a good lune for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and the message was nice. I like the "recipe" for growth you list here. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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This was a good lune for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and the message was nice. I like the "recipe" for growth you list here. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Jessi.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Lune Poetry contest. The secret to creating life in only thirteen syllables. The picture adds a visual representation of the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Lune Poetry contest. The secret to creating life in only thirteen syllables. The picture adds a visual representation of the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.