Engaging Growth
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Wish You Were Here"A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry
10 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Ahh, this contest entry touches my heart. Yes, Great Grandpa did hold Evelyn Grace in his arms before she was born. I am positive he did. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Ahh, this contest entry touches my heart. Yes, Great Grandpa did hold Evelyn Grace in his arms before she was born. I am positive he did. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Barbara.
Comment from GoWiSt
So sorry about the passing of your dad :-(
But very pleased about the recent birth of your baby! :-)
Interesting notion that in spirit, your departed dad had been wth your unborn child.
Nice reading flow and rhymes.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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So sorry about the passing of your dad :-(
But very pleased about the recent birth of your baby! :-)
Interesting notion that in spirit, your departed dad had been wth your unborn child.
Nice reading flow and rhymes.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely poem for the 'wish you were here' challenge Kim. Particularly poignant was your Dad's meeting, new bub, Evelyn Grace. A quick heavenly cuddle before birth. beautifully written.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely poem for the 'wish you were here' challenge Kim. Particularly poignant was your Dad's meeting, new bub, Evelyn Grace. A quick heavenly cuddle before birth. beautifully written.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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I am so appreciative and honored with the exceptional rating and review, Valda!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I felt the pain of loss in your words here and I feel the same abut my husband who only knew one of his four Grandchildren, a fine post and I am sorry for your loss, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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I felt the pain of loss in your words here and I feel the same abut my husband who only knew one of his four Grandchildren, a fine post and I am sorry for your loss, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly. And, I am sorry for yours.
Comment from robyn corum
Kim,
Now, that was just evil. Rude. Mean, even. You had me picturing every word and just imagining alllllllll of it. And I hated it. I do not want to consider any of that.
On the other hand, I suppose if one MUST go through such a nasty horrible life experience, it's a great idea to spin it in such a positive way. And I would expect nothing less from a lady such as yourself. This was absolutely precious.
I'm so sorry about your father. Truly. (hugs!!)
And THOSE EYES!!! That baby is ... well. I don't have words. Eat her up, ummm... Mom? Grandmom? Whatever - just give her a big smooch from auntie robyn, please.
I do have a couple notes for you, if you'll permit:
1.) unrave(l)ed
--> don't know where you're located - I know some places spell certain words differently. I'm sharing the more appropriate spelling for the States.
2.) and (thus) delayed her birth
--> merely a suggestion to get you to 6 syllables in this line
A sweet piece for your April collection. Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Kim,
Now, that was just evil. Rude. Mean, even. You had me picturing every word and just imagining alllllllll of it. And I hated it. I do not want to consider any of that.
On the other hand, I suppose if one MUST go through such a nasty horrible life experience, it's a great idea to spin it in such a positive way. And I would expect nothing less from a lady such as yourself. This was absolutely precious.
I'm so sorry about your father. Truly. (hugs!!)
And THOSE EYES!!! That baby is ... well. I don't have words. Eat her up, ummm... Mom? Grandmom? Whatever - just give her a big smooch from auntie robyn, please.
I do have a couple notes for you, if you'll permit:
1.) unrave(l)ed
--> don't know where you're located - I know some places spell certain words differently. I'm sharing the more appropriate spelling for the States.
2.) and (thus) delayed her birth
--> merely a suggestion to get you to 6 syllables in this line
A sweet piece for your April collection. Thanks so much!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Robyn!!
I Love, Love, Love this review!!! Thank you so much for the helpful suggestions. You are such a delight! Baby Evelyn got her kiss from you!
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Yay!
Comment from royowen
I'm sure he'll know he has a great granddaughter here with a smile on her face and a song in her heart for you, because of your grandpa, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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I'm sure he'll know he has a great granddaughter here with a smile on her face and a song in her heart for you, because of your grandpa, beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy!
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Welcome
Comment from Douglas Goff
Sorry for your loss and congratulations on your gain. There is no doubt your father is very aware of your new child.
Death is the worst aspect of life, but the circle never ends. It is perpetual. Great tribute to this.
D
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Sorry for your loss and congratulations on your gain. There is no doubt your father is very aware of your new child.
Death is the worst aspect of life, but the circle never ends. It is perpetual. Great tribute to this.
D
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments, Doug.
Comment from jessizero
This poem was so sweet and a little sad. I like the thought that your father spent time with Evelyn Grace before she was born. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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This poem was so sweet and a little sad. I like the thought that your father spent time with Evelyn Grace before she was born. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Jessi.
Comment from Sallyo
This rings bells for me, too. Mum never got to meet her great-grandson or great-granddaughter. The idea of an ancestor getting a little cuddle in before anyone else is fun!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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This rings bells for me, too. Mum never got to meet her great-grandson or great-granddaughter. The idea of an ancestor getting a little cuddle in before anyone else is fun!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Hi Sally!
Thank you for sharing the resonance of my poem with your life, too.
Kim
Comment from lyenochka
I remember how hard it was two years ago as you helped both your parents as they were called Home. I love your idea that your granddaughter was delayed in her birth because she was held by your dad.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I remember how hard it was two years ago as you helped both your parents as they were called Home. I love your idea that your granddaughter was delayed in her birth because she was held by your dad.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Helen!
It is something Nichole and I have talked about. She was induced on a Friday and didn?t give birth until Tuesday, in the hospital the whole time. We decided that Evelyn was being held by the grandparents she will never meet in life. This poem made us both tear up a little.
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