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The Interpretation of Dreams

Our conscious censor is suspended during dreaming

3 total reviews 
Comment from Val Crisson
Exceptional
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This is an amazing naani, and exactly how a naani should provoke thought. I am a dreamer also, and I can attest to dreams, and "frustrated desires" In my case, it's unresolved problems. Many people do not dream, and I am not sure which is better.


 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much, Val. That?s very generous.
    I think it has been established that almost everybody does dream, but some people never recall their dreams. It is thought that the uncensored mental work which takes place during dreaming is important for mental health. Dream on?
reply by Val Crisson on 08-Apr-2024
    It was a pleasure to read
Comment from s.m.kirby
Good
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I like the thought process. I just wanted to let you know that a Naani poem has four lines in it. You only have three. Good luck in the contest. Hope you have a good day.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you.
Comment from Julie Helms
Excellent
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This is a really interesting topic. My number one emotion in dreams is frustration, and I've often wondered if that means something in reality is frustrating me.
I counted 25 syllables, but the prompts says it needs to be in four lines, so you may want to amend that.
Nicely done!
Julie

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank goodness for your alertness, Julie. Yet again I am indebted and will amend.