Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Aiona,
This is a funny poem to go with the apt artwork/ I like the pun in the title.
I could see why you would stop using straws after that. I use a straw still for most places use plastic ones now. I assume because of the problem discussed in this poem.
I hope you did well in the contest.
Have a good week.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Joan.

reply by dragonpoet on 27-May-2024

Np problem, Aiona.
Joan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Some straws are useless as your poem proves here. You made me smile with this clever poem, I rarely use a straw as the flow is too slow! Ha ha ha, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Dolly.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

When I was in high school and the dark ages paper straws were the only straws that we had at the time. And usually to drink through a cola or soft drink or water it took two or three straws to do the job. Patricia .

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-May-2024

Thanks for your review, Patricia.