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God's Guinea Pig

free verse

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Comment from Esther Brown
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That is too cute. I love guinea pigs, haven't thought of them in years but used to have them as a kid. Animals bring love and joy to our lives. Well done. Esther

 Comment Written 15-May-2024

Comment from nancyjam
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How sweet this is and how lucky you are to have a
little friend like this. Animals are often best company.
One of God's blessings.
Thanks for sharing this.
Nancy

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Kristen Rose Ulrich
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This is such a sweet poem. I like the line, "It is as if God provides a soul mate so small, yet so large in presence." Sometimes the tiniest beings like babies and small animals, can create such a big statement. I also like the line, "Little heart beats create warmth." That is so pretty! Great job!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
reply by Kristen Rose Ulrich on 08-May-2024
    You?re welcome!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Darling poem about how a guinea pig (and other animals) can be like communication from God. Nice job describing with details like: "little heart beats" and 'her eyes are intense.'

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
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Mermaids, this is beyond cute! So endearing! God created a sweet little pal, perfect for you! Nessy is my sister's name who died in 2015, so this Nessie poem is special to me! Maddy

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thanks again for the generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Oh, what a touching free verse! This is my favorite stanza, but I love it all. :)
"It is as if
God provides
a soul mate
so small, yet so
large in presence"

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Teri7
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Thank you so much for writing this for the club. That is a very precious little guinea pig. They have such cute little faces. You used great descriptive words and an adorable picture. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thanks again for a generous amount of stars. Elaine
reply by Teri7 on 09-May-2024
    You are so welcome Elaine. I love reading about your little animals. They are so precious! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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This is beautiful, and so sweet. I used to have guinea pigs, hamsters, and gerbils. They can be just the most loving and cuddly little things. Great tribute!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-May-2024
    Thanks again for a generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Mark Jackson
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That is really interesting, it takes all sorts doesn't it. What a lovely tribute to our little piggy friends. I think I would like a fluffy alarm clock. Large in presence I like that line. 5 stars,

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024

Comment from royowen
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The only guinea pig we had anything to do with, was a class pet at one of our children's schools, the kids were given the task of taking th small rodent home, taking care of it overnight, the only problem when it was my daughter's turn, the poor little critter died overnight, that was the last time one was in our care, lots of cats and dogs, but no guinea pig. Thanks dear Elaine, glad yours is a friend, great write, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024