Treasure Chest
The one that got away in so many ways.6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I felt the loss and grief in your words here as you remember a moment in time from long ago and our memories sometimes haunt us and bring on the tears, a poignant post Jess, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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I felt the loss and grief in your words here as you remember a moment in time from long ago and our memories sometimes haunt us and bring on the tears, a poignant post Jess, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! This one definitely came from the heart.
Comment from Sallyo
The sixer is for a most original and unusual use of the prompt, and also for the beautiful imagery and wording. I think this is the first piece of yours I've read, unless you've entered some of the "blind" contests.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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The sixer is for a most original and unusual use of the prompt, and also for the beautiful imagery and wording. I think this is the first piece of yours I've read, unless you've entered some of the "blind" contests.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! You have no idea how awesome that makes me feel!
Comment from Douglas Goff
Sounds like you have lived and lost before! But, who hasn't.
Great line here:
Untamed feelings, raging fits of passion,
This was an intense read. Nicely done!
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Sounds like you have lived and lost before! But, who hasn't.
Great line here:
Untamed feelings, raging fits of passion,
This was an intense read. Nicely done!
D
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Yes, we all lose a little on this journey, thanks for your attention and I'm glad you liked it!
Comment from Nicki Nance
A poignant account of the last meeting. I liked your personification af Paul Mason, your candid self-exploration, and your ownership of the outcome..
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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A poignant account of the last meeting. I liked your personification af Paul Mason, your candid self-exploration, and your ownership of the outcome..
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for these observations it helps a lot.
Comment from Mark Jackson
I am just flicking through my read feed clicking up next and you came up again. I really like this one. I was assuming that Paul Masson was a musician, I was intrigue to find out he makes wine or Brandy. Drinking yourself deaf, I know I have. I really like it. So you get six stars great work. Good luck in the competition you will get my vote.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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I am just flicking through my read feed clicking up next and you came up again. I really like this one. I was assuming that Paul Masson was a musician, I was intrigue to find out he makes wine or Brandy. Drinking yourself deaf, I know I have. I really like it. So you get six stars great work. Good luck in the competition you will get my vote.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you! Yes, his stuff is near the bottom shelf haha a great glimpse into my mindset at the time.
Comment from shelley kaye
aw so sad. . . but it makes a great imagistic poem!
nice word choices and smooth flow
may i make a suggestion on maybe trying the black background color and a pink or orange (or both) font colors to blend in with the cool pic? just a thought! ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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aw so sad. . . but it makes a great imagistic poem!
nice word choices and smooth flow
may i make a suggestion on maybe trying the black background color and a pink or orange (or both) font colors to blend in with the cool pic? just a thought! ;)
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you! Once I figure out how to do that I will definitely try it out. Thank you for your critique.
