Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu

Excellent

So true for many, and if left to bubble up, have the potential to erupt. These words rhyme beautifully and work superbly with the image, which conveys just how raw it is. Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024

Deeply appreciated.

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Great visual word choices and excellent relationship advice for all types of verbalization for an situations Thanks for Sharing your thoughts and creativity

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024

Thank you so much.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest. You got the syllable count and rhymes right, and I enjoyed it. Telling deep emotions is bold, as you said. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thanks so much.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

When exposing our deep emotions we are bold in every sense of the word as we reveal our true selves, I enjoyed he sentiment and rhymes here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thanks so very much.