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Cat at Work

The paw and natural law

48 total reviews 
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Re: your notes (first) -- Yes, life does indeed go on -- for the fat cats! *wink* (Yuck, by the way.)
I'm not on site nearly as often as I used to be, so I miss a lot of good work these days, but I will make a point of looking for your postings more often -- this is hilarious! (Poor kitty. Poorer still, slow rat.)

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024

reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you so very much Don for going back into the archive and reading and then rating "cat at work". Thank you also for those five beautiful stars.
reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Jul-2024
    It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
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Haha, Dr. Nad, I applaud this short, funny,and cute piece! Wow, what more could you say? This says it all! It's masterful! Way to ace that writing prompt! Maddy

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024
    Hey Maddy, you have no idea how happy you have made me. I really like my little poem "Cat at work". Until tonight I had 46 reviews and people seemed to like it as well, BUT . . . you just gave me the only six star rating I have on that little poem. I have been wanting to bribe somebody to do that for me! L O L L O L L O L. Thanks.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Author,
I love this whimsical poem. With just eight syllables, you've created a cute, humorous poem all cat lovers can enjoy. I have a dog myself.
Good luck with all your writing.
Cindy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
    Thank you so much Cindy for reaching into my limited stack of writing and reading and reviewing: "Cat at work". Thank you for the five beautiful stars.
Comment from Esther Brown
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Hard to give away a 6 on three lines. Smile. I read your portfolio. You have the gift. By all means keep writing. One writer's advice stuck. Workers can't have worker's block or they get fired....so seat butt in chair and pick up quill. Esther

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

reply by the author on 09-May-2024
    Lol. Thank you so much, Esther for taking the time to read and review: "Cat At Work" I want to thank you also for the kind words and admonition to keep writing. I believe I also caught the hint of a metaphorical six. Thanks so much!
Comment from DeboraDyess
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That's pretty funny, Doc! And I think I owned that cat at one point. Or, rather, that the cat owned me. I suppose that's just a matter of perspective!
Great job on the poem - best in the contest!
Blessings,
Deb

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much Deb for your taking the time to both read and review my poem: "Cat At Work".

    You are absolutely correct! It was your cat that I wrote about! I tried to disguise in hopes that it wouldn?t be recognized. (Oh Well)

    Thanks for the five beautiful stars you gave me!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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There was a cat who ate the rat which wasn't very fat! LOL:-)

If this is the rat, it's huge! And this poem is lots of fun.

I hope you didn't take this picture.

Good luck in the contest.

xo Pam

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for reading and reviewing "Cat at Work"! I didn't take the picture, I found it in FanArt Review. Blessings sis.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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I loved this short poem about a fat cat who ate a rat. I would have gone a different way with this rifting on the fat cat image linking it to fat leaders in power

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing cat at work. Thank you also for the five beautiful stars you gave me.
Comment from hullabaloo22
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Let's face it; that's exactly why a lot of people keep cats. Funnily enough my cats would never do that, not with rats. They'd catch them, kill them, but never eat them.
All requirements for the competition were met. Well done!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to both read and review: "Cat at Work". I also want to thank you so much for the five beautiful stars that you gave me!
Comment from jessizero
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This was an excellent 1-6-1 poem! I got a big kick out of it. You got the syllable count right, and you used the required rhymes, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing: "Cat at Work". I think you also for the five beautiful stars you bestowed upon me!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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The cat doesn't look fat to me. A good mowser cannot be beat. The poem was sweet and short. The picture is nice an paints a good picture. Enjoy your week. Karen :-)

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing: "Cat at Work". I think you also for the five beautiful stars you bestowed upon me!
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 07-Apr-2024
    U R Welcome :-)