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Love is in the Air

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Love poems and sweet nothings

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nice 4th poem for the NaPoWriMo contest. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery with the picture of the dress. I love polka dogs! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 05-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Thank you, Teri.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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What a lovely ritual which you have maintained for so long! I love green and that dress is beautiful and complemented so well with your rhyming octelle. I particularly like how those two lines are repeated to reflect the recurrence of the tradition, also reinforced by the imagery of the net. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 05-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Thank you, Debbie.
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Ginda What a cute and I love your tradition of wearing polka's on your anniversary with your husband
We got married in matching blue flared jeans and velour windcheaters mine red ,his blue , we eloped and have just celebrated our 50 yrs so your
poem hit the spot with me
Also good luck in the voting you have mine
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 05-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Thank you, Chris, for reviewing and for your kind vote of confidence.
Comment from Wendy G
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A super love poem, and, good for you both, wearing green polka dots on your special day. I enjoyed this one, and Octelle is a perfect fit for your words.
Wendy

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Wendy.
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Ginda!

You did a beautiful job with the Octelle form! Congratulations on 52 years together. That is amazing! I admire that longtime commitment.

Good luck in the contest!

Kim

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thanks, Kim, for reviewing and for your good wishes.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem beautifully captures the idea of love at first sight. I thought this was creative and well written. I love how your poem expresses the deep connection and affection felt with your loved one.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Michael.