Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i think you clicked on the wrong event lol
this was supposed to be for the alphabet haiku
the mirror cinquain was a previous week -
just wanted to let you know lol

anyway, this was a great mirror cinquain
i like the contrast between spiritually and maturity
very interesting and thought-provoking
a smooth flow reading

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-May-2024

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reply by the author on 03-May-2024

Hi Shelley!

You are right, I did lol
No way to fix that now.
In case you need ideas for new styles, I did pretty much a different style each day in April. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Kim

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Encouraging and allowing things to grow in every sense of the word is a gift and I enjoyed your personification of it here, a fine post for the club, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thanks, Dolly! I love your comments.

Kim

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

I am flicking through the Next up feature and got two of yours in a row. I am not sure what you are writing about, obviously the picture make me think of a seed and a quick read might confirm this but there is something deeper. I feel it is also about human growth and as you mention community. Thanks for making me think.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Hi Mark!
I am happy you enjoyed this selection. Your interpretation is spot on. I appreciate your willingness to ponder my words.

Kim

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great mirror cinquain. You got the syllable count right, and I admired your rhymes. Thank you for sharing your poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024

Thank you, Jessi!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with your mirror cinquain and a thoughtful reflection on how growing spiritually also enhances the community all around us!
By the way, I think your post was linked to the wrong club challenge but it doesn't matter really.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

I noticed that I linked it to the one above on accident! Thank you for a lovely review.

Kim

Comment from Sallyo

Excellent

That's complicated enough and you chose to add to the difficulty by rhyming it. It's going to be fun watching your different forms and presentations:-)

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Hi Sally! This is another form from the Potlatch Poetry Club.
Kim