Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job with your essence poem, Ginda! And not only did you fulfill the internal and end rhymes, you even had a third rhyme - a near rhyme of penned and sent! Hope this does well in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thank you, Helen.

Comment from Mintybee

Excellent

The internal and the external rhyme work well here. Share, tease, care please - all good words for a love letter. The first line starting with an internal thought and the second line starting with a shareable thought added really good movement to this short poem.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thank you, Mintybee, for your review. I appreciate your feedback.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You bring back fond memories of yesteryear when love notes were sent and received. I like your use of both internal and end rhyme in this very short poem. Rod

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thank you, Rod.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Receiving a love letter is a treasure and my husband used to put little notes on my car when I was at work and I would return to drive home with a few words of love, I enjoyed the romance in these words Ginda, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024

Thanks, Dolly. Wishing you lots of love.