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A NaPoWriMo Book of Poetry

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Comment from shelley kaye
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hehehe a grand haiku!
a fun and smooth flow

love the face on the boy with the ninja turtles shirt!
priceless why am i here expression LOL!
the baby's face is cute too - looks like she's hungry!

great alphabet haiku!
thank you for participating in the event and sharing!
shelley :)


 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Shelley! What a fun review! I know you are taking a break from Potlatch for NaPoWriMo. Would you like me to take the month of April to post prompts/styles for you? We used to do that back in the day, so one person wasn't doing all the work. It looks like you are keeping up the tradition well! Thank you!

    Kim
reply by shelley kaye on 04-Apr-2024
    nah. that's okay...
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Well done Kim with all of your G words and welcome back for NaPoWriMonth. A lovely picture of you and your family, I hope you've been going well. Nicely done, cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Valda!
    Great to hear from you! We have a new grand baby at home, she's keeping us busy! Her name is Evelyn Grace. I look forward to catching up this month!
    Kim
Comment from Sallyo
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Ooh, what fun! I hadn't heard of that form before. I can see how these, allowing photos or other pictures, could make a lovely book. A thirty-poem volume of these would be a wonderful family gift book.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Hi Sally!
    It is the Potlatch Poetry Club form this week. Great idea! Thank you.

    Kim
Comment from jessizero
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You did a great job with this format. You got the syllable count correct, and I loved your alliteration. Children can be a great gift. I also like the picture of your family that you included. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Jessi. I appreciate the kind comments.

    Kim
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a delightful alphabet Haiku. As I read it I could sense your joy flowing out. As I spent Easter with my grandchildren it touched me especially. They are all cute, but the youngest one is a real 'aaah' factor. kay

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Katherine!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We gain such immense joy from our Grandchildren as they bring life to our world, you have a wonderful family and I loved your picture and your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from lyenochka
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Hi Kim! Welcome back! Did you join the Napowrimo contest this year? I saw that someone already created the contest so I didn't and I'm not entering it this year. I loved you alphabet haiku and your picture!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
    Hi Helen! I created the contest lol actually, there are 2 of them. I will add this one to my book, just haven't created it yet. I hope all is well with you! I will be here for NaPoWriMo, so we can catch up! Good to hear from you!

    Kim