Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

You write very dense (tightly packed) poetry which is beautiful to read but a little difficult to understand.
I got a strong sense the co-mingling of the heavenly and earthly realms during times of prayer and worship, and how this impacts those around us.
It is a truly beautiful concept.

I have one spelling suggestion for you:

Nurishing (Nourishing)

Thanks for sharing!
Julie :-)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024

Thank you for such an in depth review, i thank you and wish you many blessings.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

Gordon, my friend, this is so perfectly written, and the chosen words and subject couldn't be any more profound and on point.

You are graceful and concise, and I love that about your work!

Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024

Thank you for always being a positive friend, i hope you enjoy life and feel more alive.