Comment from Topeking

Excellent

Well done on this well written poem! It creates tension and hope towards the crucifixion of Jesus Christ! Good title used! Good choice of words used to convey this remarkable event! Well done on the 575 rhyming scheme!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024

Many thanks for your review and encouragement

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

This is a very wonderful 575 poem that reminds us of the two most important events in human history! The crucifixion and the resurrection. Thanks so very much for sharing these words with this picture. I'm going to vote for this in the 575 poem writing prompt.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024

Thank you for the review and your encouragement

reply by Dr. Nad on 30-Mar-2024

You are most welcome. Have a blessed Easter with your family.

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024

Thank you. And of course, blessings to you and yours too. He Is Risen!

reply by Dr. Nad on 31-Mar-2024

:-)

Comment from CornishChick

Excellent

You convey a lot within the confines of the contest. Three distinct thoughts in three sentences. A great deal of creativity within strict boundaries. Very well done.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024

Thank you for your encouragement I do appreciate it.

Comment from ABC123XYZ

Excellent

Definitely a good topic for the weekend. The artwork you chose is beautiful. This is a good 5-7-5 poem that gives reverence to His sacrifice. Thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024

Thank you so much