Gone For Good
Your children are wondering why4 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Maguire
Abandonment, such loneliness, heartache. Your poem cuts right to the quick. Right to the point. Very Nicely done. I appreciate your feelings.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Abandonment, such loneliness, heartache. Your poem cuts right to the quick. Right to the point. Very Nicely done. I appreciate your feelings.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the review! It was inspired by a story I'd read about a mother who abandoned her children, leaving them with their abusive father!
Comment from Topeking
Wow amazing representation of abandoned kids, the fact that they can't come to a conclusion of why is really tragic. Good imaged used and the poem is well written and the words you used made it very emotional. Well done on the 575 rhyming scheme!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Wow amazing representation of abandoned kids, the fact that they can't come to a conclusion of why is really tragic. Good imaged used and the poem is well written and the words you used made it very emotional. Well done on the 575 rhyming scheme!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thanks for the review! I also think the lack of knowledge is one of the most upsetting parts - a lot of them feel like they are responsible because they weren't 'good' enough!
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For real? it is truly heartbreaking indeed! Instead of them playing and enjoying their childhood now they have this burden they have to carry and think they are responsible for.
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For real? it is truly heartbreaking indeed! Instead of them playing and enjoying their childhood now they have this burden they have to carry and think they are responsible for.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. Such a sad poem that tugs at the heart of the reader. The artwork is chilling in combination with the words. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. Such a sad poem that tugs at the heart of the reader. The artwork is chilling in combination with the words. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good 575 form that you have written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a wonderful weekend and a very happy Easter. God bless. Patricia .
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This is a very good 575 form that you have written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a wonderful weekend and a very happy Easter. God bless. Patricia .
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
