Creation
God created all of us3 total reviews
Comment from Topeking
Beautiful poem with an encouragement of power of prayer when we are consisted because in God's timing he will answer all of our prayers! Well done the 575 rhyming scheme!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
Beautiful poem with an encouragement of power of prayer when we are consisted because in God's timing he will answer all of our prayers! Well done the 575 rhyming scheme!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. Lovely poem and artwork. I am wondering one thing about line 3. Did you mean to keep praying for Him or did you mean to say keep praying to Him? It works both ways but when I first read it, it didn't seem quite right. If I am wrong please disregard. The poem is lovely. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. Lovely poem and artwork. I am wondering one thing about line 3. Did you mean to keep praying for Him or did you mean to say keep praying to Him? It works both ways but when I first read it, it didn't seem quite right. If I am wrong please disregard. The poem is lovely. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you! It means pray to God. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine plea here to all those non-believers and I liked your fine words for the contest and I wish you luck with this warm and faithful contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
A fine plea here to all those non-believers and I liked your fine words for the contest and I wish you luck with this warm and faithful contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you!