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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Good old Mac Yung! He's pulling a few things together here and I like the way he's giving Morgan a hard time of it! It was all being sown up a bit too neatly. And I don't believe Anderson is the serial killer unless he working in league with Tamra (whom I still don't trust, broken fingers or not!) You're certainly keeping your twist until the end, Doug. Unless this is going on beyond end of March? Small edit: you had to sleep with some of these dead prostitute(s) to solve the case. Thanks for sharing, Doug. Debbie
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Good old Mac Yung! He's pulling a few things together here and I like the way he's giving Morgan a hard time of it! It was all being sown up a bit too neatly. And I don't believe Anderson is the serial killer unless he working in league with Tamra (whom I still don't trust, broken fingers or not!) You're certainly keeping your twist until the end, Doug. Unless this is going on beyond end of March? Small edit: you had to sleep with some of these dead prostitute(s) to solve the case. Thanks for sharing, Doug. Debbie
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Debbie!
Comment from Terry Broxson
Douglas, this does all sound a little convenient. I agree with Mac. I think we are waiting for another shoe to drop. Travel safe, and I look forward to reading the last chapter. Terry.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Douglas, this does all sound a little convenient. I agree with Mac. I think we are waiting for another shoe to drop. Travel safe, and I look forward to reading the last chapter. Terry.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank, Terry. Time to finish this.
Comment from Soledadpaz
Oh, I just love Mac's question. That you had to sleep with them!
That Mac is good at his job. He clearly gets under Morgan's skin, but Morgan handled himself pretty well. Stuck to the script even though he is in pain.
Can't wait for the ending!
Sol
Sol
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Oh, I just love Mac's question. That you had to sleep with them!
That Mac is good at his job. He clearly gets under Morgan's skin, but Morgan handled himself pretty well. Stuck to the script even though he is in pain.
Can't wait for the ending!
Sol
Sol
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Mac is one of my favorite characters. Last chapter! See you tomorrow!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I never did trust Mac Yun. I still have a feeling he's into this way too deep, yet, I'm not sure how he fits in. I'm glad Morgan is on the road to complete recovery. I love the story. I will pray for traveling mercies.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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I never did trust Mac Yun. I still have a feeling he's into this way too deep, yet, I'm not sure how he fits in. I'm glad Morgan is on the road to complete recovery. I love the story. I will pray for traveling mercies.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you! We are having a blast!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
What a hero! Nicely written.
Does Mac get punched in the nose??????
I agree, Ruby falls is beautiful!
And I don't think any who have followed along will miss the last chapter.
Safe travels.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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What a hero! Nicely written.
Does Mac get punched in the nose??????
I agree, Ruby falls is beautiful!
And I don't think any who have followed along will miss the last chapter.
Safe travels.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Wayne. See you tomorrow!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
On Spring break? Who does that as a senior citizen. I have trouble getting up from the loo, my settin chair and ... well IT doesn't get up at all. Silly me. I await the ending.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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On Spring break? Who does that as a senior citizen. I have trouble getting up from the loo, my settin chair and ... well IT doesn't get up at all. Silly me. I await the ending.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Ha! I have a 9 and 10 year old.