Redemption
Thank you, Jesus.30 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
"Forgive them Father for they know not what they do."
The video is graphic in BW but the message is clear. Jesus could have flown away, but he decided to stay. Death has no dominion over the blessed Son of God.
You have told His story so well and thank you. K xx
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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"Forgive them Father for they know not what they do."
The video is graphic in BW but the message is clear. Jesus could have flown away, but he decided to stay. Death has no dominion over the blessed Son of God.
You have told His story so well and thank you. K xx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Dear Kace, Thank you for this lovely review and words for my Redemption poem. You are so kind and I appreciate it so very much. We must never forget what Jesus did for us. Thanks for being my sister in Christ.
Much love, Debi
Comment from Sally Law
This is an exceptional poem of the passion of the Christ, dear friend. Just beautifully written and prested with heart, personal too.
Most noteworthy:
What He endured seemed so unfair
I know I helped to put Him there
I have done wrong, but I've no fear
Because my conscience now is clear....
Jack read this with me, and we both say, Hallelujah! and Amen!
Thank you for sharing this Easter blessing.
Love & Blessings in Christ our Lord!
Sal and Jack XOs!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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This is an exceptional poem of the passion of the Christ, dear friend. Just beautifully written and prested with heart, personal too.
Most noteworthy:
What He endured seemed so unfair
I know I helped to put Him there
I have done wrong, but I've no fear
Because my conscience now is clear....
Jack read this with me, and we both say, Hallelujah! and Amen!
Thank you for sharing this Easter blessing.
Love & Blessings in Christ our Lord!
Sal and Jack XOs!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Dearest Sally, Thank you for this lovely review and words for my Redemption poem. You are so kind and I appreciate it so very much.
Thank you so very much for the gift of six stars for this too. And for being my sister in Christ. Love, Debi
Comment from Lisasview
Of course this poem is so very lovely and filled with hope. Easter is such a special and important time. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts dearest Debi.
Hugs to you and a very Happy Easter,
Lisa
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Of course this poem is so very lovely and filled with hope. Easter is such a special and important time. Thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts dearest Debi.
Hugs to you and a very Happy Easter,
Lisa
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Lisa, Thank you for this lovely review and words for my Redemption poem. You are so kind and I appreciate it so very much. Much love, Debi
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You are so very welcome..
Lisa
Comment from tempeste
Ciao,
Your poem describes in detail Jesus' anguish.
I saw the video you provided too.
Many say that Mel Gibons The Passion was too crude.
The truth is we feel far more Jesus' pain , humiliation and sufferings when we see it.
Words sometimes fall short when it comes to physical torture.
It's a shame that mankind does not value His sacrifice.
We are at war , children are being killed, dying of famine and disease.
Our planet is dying too , we abuse, exploit and pollute it.
Mankind is creating its own hell here.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Ciao,
Your poem describes in detail Jesus' anguish.
I saw the video you provided too.
Many say that Mel Gibons The Passion was too crude.
The truth is we feel far more Jesus' pain , humiliation and sufferings when we see it.
Words sometimes fall short when it comes to physical torture.
It's a shame that mankind does not value His sacrifice.
We are at war , children are being killed, dying of famine and disease.
Our planet is dying too , we abuse, exploit and pollute it.
Mankind is creating its own hell here.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Dear Tempeste, I owe you an apology as this was supposed to have gone through days ago, and something must have happened where my thank you did not save. I was very touched by your kind and such a truthful review for my poem, Redemption. Thank you also for the generous six stars. I agree with every word you said. I hate to think that it could be much worse than America, but i am hearing it is like that all over the world.
Thanks again, my friend. Love, Debi
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No problems .. sometime I press the
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instead of the ?save ?button.
So I think I have posted instead I haven?t .
Up to this January PM Macron was adamant in NOT sending EU troops to Ukraine.
Now all of a sudden he is saying not to excluded the possibility that the EU could send troops , he even added 10 days ago that France was thinking of sending 2.000 troops ( he then hopes other EU members will follow suit)
Why the change ?
The war was lost already in September last year . The senate stopped funding too then
but Biden doesn?t want to declare defeat cause it will cost him the elections .
So he wants the war to drag on until November .
But there is a problem.
Zelensky has no more army , more than 400,000 Ukraine soldiers died so he needs troops and money to drag on the war for Biden
Macron is playing with fire Putin said he will shoot down EU planes and kill EU troops
He is not bluffing Europe is a pass from WW3 .
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Just when I thought it was impossible to despise our president any more than I already did.I am in complete and utter disgust for that worthless thing.
Comment from Mintybee
Very powerful Easter poem! I especially loved the fourth stanza. The poem pivoted from historical to personal and touched on how meaningful Easter is.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Very powerful Easter poem! I especially loved the fourth stanza. The poem pivoted from historical to personal and touched on how meaningful Easter is.
Mintybee
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Mintybee, I thank you so much for the lovely comments for my
Good Friday poem.
I appreciate your kindness so very much. Have a very blessed Easter, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Absolutely beautiful! Well - written, a great and important message, wonderful flow, perfect rhyme scheme. You are so talented and always do such a beautiful job!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Absolutely beautiful! Well - written, a great and important message, wonderful flow, perfect rhyme scheme. You are so talented and always do such a beautiful job!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Hi Monica, I thank you so much for the lovely comments for my
Good Friday poem. And also I am honored by your six stars.
I appreciate your kindness so very much. Have a very blessed Easter, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank you for sharing this powerful poem for Easter weekend. Sometimes it's hard to read and contemplate the horrific pain he endured for our redemption but remember we must.
Blessings Debi and Happy Easter
Janet.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing this powerful poem for Easter weekend. Sometimes it's hard to read and contemplate the horrific pain he endured for our redemption but remember we must.
Blessings Debi and Happy Easter
Janet.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Hello Janet, I thank you so much for the lovely comments for my
Good Friday poem.
I appreciate your kindness so very much. Have a very blessed Easter, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Debi, Love the flow of this! You wrote a beautiful poem foe Easter. Love the way you expressed the last days of Christ. Your poem is effortless to read and a wonderful honor to Christ. You timing in posting this fits Easter so well! I feel so lucky I have one six left that I can bless your poem with!
Happy Easter to you and Yours! Nancy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Hi Debi, Love the flow of this! You wrote a beautiful poem foe Easter. Love the way you expressed the last days of Christ. Your poem is effortless to read and a wonderful honor to Christ. You timing in posting this fits Easter so well! I feel so lucky I have one six left that I can bless your poem with!
Happy Easter to you and Yours! Nancy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Hi Nancy, I thank you so much for the lovely comments for my
Good Friday poem. I am so very honored too by your six stars.
I appreciate your kindness so very much. Have a very blessed Easter, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Mark Jackson
I liked this it worked really well but I fell it ran into a couple of problems in the final stanza. Sacrificed does not rhyme with died, was this a conscious decision? I had expected Christ which rhymes. I wasn't quite sure about our hearts are poured it rhymes well but I struggled with it. Does: our hearts out poured, work? Anyway I am being picky because you nearly got a six.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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I liked this it worked really well but I fell it ran into a couple of problems in the final stanza. Sacrificed does not rhyme with died, was this a conscious decision? I had expected Christ which rhymes. I wasn't quite sure about our hearts are poured it rhymes well but I struggled with it. Does: our hearts out poured, work? Anyway I am being picky because you nearly got a six.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Mark, let me start by saying welcome. I hope you're very happy here. I usually try to welcome newbies from the start, but you slipped by me somehow.
Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem. I admit that I did take a little for granted with my near rhyme which most people don't say too much about because I am normally a stickler with rhyme and meter.
However I did like your suggestion about the hearts poured and I used it, so thank you very much. I did this one in the middle of the night when I woke and couldn't sleep and posted by morning. So thanks for the near six. LOL.
I hope we will be good friends and thanks again. I will be over to check out your work too and fan you before too long. Debi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very powerful poem about the basis of a faith that has persisted for more than 2000 years. Wonderful reminder of what Easter means to each of us who are Christians.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Very powerful poem about the basis of a faith that has persisted for more than 2000 years. Wonderful reminder of what Easter means to each of us who are Christians.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Carol, I thank you so much for the lovely comments for my
Good Friday poem.
I appreciate your kindness so very much. Have a very blessed Easter, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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Wishing you a wonderful Easter also.
